Upon A Winter's Day Poem by Valerie Dohren
Upon A Winter's Day
So cold upon a winter's day
In icy winds the trees did sway
And all around the snow there lay -
So cold upon a winter's day
I felt the chill upon my face
The mist did all the hills embrace
With frosted trees as fine-spun lace -
I felt the chill upon my face
And snowflakes melting on my hand
Beneath my feet the frozen land
White crystals speckling the sand -
Like snowflakes melting on my hand
With raindrops falling from the sky
The birds to warmer regions fly
You left me here, alone, to sigh -
With raindrops falling from the sky
O why then did you say goodbye …..
May the rain soon vanish from your world Val, enchanting poem with such a heartfelt ending.
Very Beautiful Valerie, love the rhyming. I can only imagine as have not seen snow, so thank you for putting me in the picture. You make it so real.
how beautiful description...each word tells a new story of a winter...bravo mam thank you for sharing love payal
O why, when did this love die. an enjoyable read and excellent write
A very skilled piece, enjoy the brief time the season is with us.
The winter can be beautiful... and cruel... so similar to love... very nice poem, , , Terry
Perfect rhyme scheme. I feel the rhythm as I read. So lovely and pure, and yet so sad. I thoroughly enjoyed. Well done Val.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/30/2024 11:46:16 PM # 1.0.0.1119
A beautiful poem, a fantastic write.