Venom Poem by Muhammad Ali

Venom

Rating: 4.7


Worse
It was
To hold,
Worst..
If I told

Friday, September 1, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: silence
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unwritten Soul 01 September 2017

Powerful write, the correctness the sharpness all in this brief poem. So which one you going to tell bcoz either way you suffer... Loved it

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Susan Williams 11 September 2017

Nine words! ! ! ! ! ! ! It only took you nine words to expound on the quality of silence in this circumstance. That is an awesome undertaking and you succeeded skillfully. The poem makes the reader pause and consider- -this is no read and walk away poem. 10++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Kumarmani Mahakul 09 September 2017

Misuse of speaking words create venom, it is better to keep silence.

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Muzahidul Reza 09 September 2017

Yes, Venom is such a poison, .....................

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Valsa George 09 September 2017

If we hold venom inside against a person, it is harmful, but if we spill out that venom before him, it is even worse....! Such condensed form of worldly wisdom....! Brevity which speaks volumes! Great write!

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Muhammad Ali 10 September 2017

Valsa G, thanks for your appreciation. sometimes, when venom isn't against someone, it may be just a truth...

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Mj Lemon 08 September 2017

Very thought provoking, Ali. Indeed you have captured the nature of venom in these few lines. Its toxicity can destroy the self, or the other. How difficult life becomes when choice is reduced only to being able to decide how and when that harm may manifest. A great poem.

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