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Ali Adamson


Colours Dispersed...


(1)

Youth brings passion
of the way
beyond destination
just to play

I would dive
when it storm
for a pearl
in some charm
and it was later...
I came to know that...
I could sink!
that was PINK! !
...

(2)

I was lone...
I was half
the moment came...
I did laugh
and my heart...
cool in wine
a hand softly
held mine
when I saw...
that was you!
my life GREY...
turned BLUE!
...

(3)

Keeping hearts in their hands
thoughts creeping on their foreheads
tongues dried...
eyes narrowed...
they had travelled...
millions centuries
to this hell!
wishless creatures...

He who travels...
he will breathe!
He who stops...
a dagger will be
in his back...
this is BLACK! !
...

(4)

O dear listener!
O dear fellow!
O dear reader!
O dear me!

Let's feel...
let's listen...
when there is silence
... no one speaks!
and let's give
the way to roots
may this pale...
... love GREEN!

Submitted: Thursday, May 07, 2009

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  • Bronze Star - 6,576 Points Soulful Heart (6/27/2014 2:11:00 AM)

    a rainbow of life's journey.....................but green is that takes you forward with hope...........may u stay so... (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 6,576 Points Soulful Heart (3/3/2014 11:17:00 AM)

    The colour of life itself.....a blend of pink blue black yet its upto us to keep it forever green.....a poem that surely will b evergreen... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 302 Points Shahzia Batool (12/19/2013 11:52:00 AM)

    the life is seen through the allegory of colors,
    a well-wrought composition,
    and with many memorable phrases like:
    He who travels...
    he will breathe! ...
    - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Anjali Sinha (5/20/2009 12:40:00 AM)

    wow
    lovely
    u made me dip myself
    in those myraid colours of the rainbow
    a tenner from me
    anjali (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Shashendra Amalshan (5/19/2009 1:27:00 PM)

    Shashendra Amalshan (5/19/2009 1: 27: 00 PM) | Delete this message
    Let's feel...
    'let's listen...
    when there is silence
    ... no one speaks!
    and let's give
    the way to roots
    may this pale...
    ... love GREEN'
    very true indeed, ....love green..great poem for the modern times....wish u well Ali...son of Adam...10++++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie DaNa XxX (5/15/2009 2:12:00 AM)

    hi Ali...
    this is really colourful poem... i like how the color go with the events... your an amazing poets..keep writting... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Rajkumar Mukherjee (5/14/2009 12:43:00 PM)

    Dear Ali,
    This is a really good poem linking colours with life in its various exposition. All colours added together is White and absense of all colours make it Black. Without a really large White canvas you coudn't have made this large picture with giant and fine strokes.The only colour missing in your cavas is Red which is now covering most of the land, the Earth is having, through Terrorism, economic and political wars.The choice of words, presentation of imagery and overall the poem is thought provoking. Thanks for sharing A-10- from me -Rajkumar (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 374 Points Saadat Tahir (5/14/2009 7:08:00 AM)

    hi Ali

    u went rt through the rainbow....and painted a huge canvas in giant strokes
    great writing
    cheers (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 20 Points Lalitha iyer (5/13/2009 1:41:00 AM)

    Reading and re-reading I am still trying to find out the entire beauty of the verse. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Shweta Advani (5/10/2009 3:37:00 AM)

    U hv really painted abeautiful poem here..love ur thought process.. n also including urself in the listener's list is a great sign of humility...God Bless: -) 10+++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie *Smile4ever* (5/10/2009 12:05:00 AM)

    Dear Ali... U have a great command on yr pen.. Colour dispersed is really awesome.. U have made it colourfull.. Thanks for sharing..

    *Smile4ever* (Report) Reply

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