Weather Poem by Muhammad Ali

Weather

Rating: 4.5


This Earth
Becomes pain
When it rains
From the skies
Of one's eyes

Tuesday, September 22, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: emotions
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Abdulrazak Aralimatti 22 September 2015

Verily, a lovely expression Loved reading it

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Seema Chowdhury 13 October 2015

Expressive and meaningful.

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M Asim Nehal 23 October 2015

Superb, Rain is good in both ways be it from clouds or eyes, it washes everything.10

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Shakil Ahmed 27 October 2015

rain from sky is welcomed but the rain from eyes are not solicited, well-composed poem, i enjoyed reading the poem, if you find time please read some of my poems and leave your comments.

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Kelly Kurt 30 June 2016

So brilliantly stated, Ali. Thanks

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Mj Lemon 01 June 2019

Magnificent, Ali. I don't know how I missed this verse....To be able to touch the earth, even through tears. This goes to myfavourites.

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Susan Williams 27 May 2017

when it rains from the skies of one's eyes- - - - - that, my friend, is an awesome image and it will not be forgotten. This is the joy of writing- -to write something that will linger in people's minds. Well-done. Exceedingly well-done! 10+

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Akhtar Jawad 08 January 2017

Tears of a loved one are always painful, nicely painted human sentiments'

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Nosheen Irfan 18 August 2016

A succinct gem of a piece, i must add.

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Nosheen Irfan 18 August 2016

How you say a lot in just a few words is an art. A lovely piece. I'm so impressed.10

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