Ali Adamson

Hate Me, If You Can - Poem by Ali Adamson

Hate me, if you can!

Hate the little star in the skies
When it falls down my eyes

Hate this fragrance.... I got
Collecting flowers... in the journey
From my inner to your heart!

Hate the words!
I learned... from the love...
Beats in the heart
When it whispers in my thoughts!

Hate the SONG of our soul!
Ever singing
' Where we unite......
' There is life
' There is fate'

You can hate!

Comments about Hate Me, If You Can by Ali Adamson

  • Gold Star - 50,036 Points Akhtar Jawad (4/3/2014 3:51:00 AM)

    Hate the SONG of our soul!
    Ever singing
    ' Where we unite......
    ' There is life
    ' There is fate'
    Universality of your poems is the need of time, good work. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 18,825 Points Amitava Sur (2/2/2014 1:51:00 AM)

    It's a lovely song by it's content & structure...... loved it (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,483 Points Shahzia Batool (12/27/2013 9:31:00 AM)

    composed with confidence! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 11,531 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (12/27/2013 4:28:00 AM)

    Where we unite
    There is life
    Then it is left for fate to decide. I care, even if you don't. Beautifully delivered the message. Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,262 Points Geetha Jayakumar (12/25/2013 8:35:00 AM)

    Beautiful write Ali. How can one hate after reading such a beautiful poem. Heartfelt. Loved reading it. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,399 Points Free Bird (12/21/2013 8:51:00 AM)

    wahh what a poem, like it ] (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 23 Points Aldrich Suarez (5/23/2013 3:22:00 AM)

    haters are good! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! people who can remember you everyday hahahah (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Anthony Arias (7/29/2009 2:08:00 AM)

    Nice and full bodied. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Lady Grace (6/9/2009 2:13:00 AM)

    hate me, but i can't do the same
    hate me but that was all i can give
    hate me for nothing left except tears
    hate me, ..I WILL NOT COMPLAIN..grace (Report) Reply

  • Rookie ****tamara Hanaring.****** , A Thought Mate, (5/28/2009 3:43:00 AM)

    a poem which filled by love..hate in ove mean more than love..well done (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Life Is My Poem....~ (5/24/2009 2:49:00 PM)

    its one can hate u, such a good person.......ur poems have a lot hidden meanings......wonderful..! 10+++++ (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 96,916 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/21/2009 9:09:00 AM)

    hate i sno answer dear.if hate was answerthentherewould havebeenchaos all over. good words and fineoratory...10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie DaNa XxX (5/16/2009 12:54:00 AM)

    dear Ali..... what a lovely poem! ! ! im sure no one can hate such a great poet like you! ! ! keep doing your best... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 40 Points Ashraful Musaddeq (5/14/2009 8:35:00 AM)

    A poem in a different style with nice content.
    10++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Uzma Jamil (5/12/2009 12:38:00 PM)

    ali life z here wd al its pains and pleasures.ur thoughts r interconnected wd the changing moods of inner and external atmosphere. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie salha kibwana (4/24/2009 6:30:00 AM)

    personification, amzain, , i love what i just read it made me smile...well um i have an idea name a theme that me and you could write on id love to see how one theme could branch of into different one (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Melissa Pelletier (4/14/2009 8:50:00 AM)

    yes! well done, love it! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Deependra Kumar Jha (4/9/2009 6:19:00 AM)

    Awesome! your expressions are too good. Loved every bit of it.10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Honest Heart (4/6/2009 9:45:00 AM)

    wooooooooow! ! ! ....woooooooow! ! !'s really's touching....very significant.....I really like the way that the word flow on.... keeeeeeeeeeep on writing your wonderful poems... :) :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Hadi Hussain Butt (4/6/2009 4:50:00 AM)

    Only one word, awesome! ! ! Its so subjective yet so general n i just love it :) (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, February 4, 2009

Poem Edited: Tuesday, December 17, 2013

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