Ali Adamson


Hate Me, If You Can - Poem by Ali Adamson

Hate me, if you can!

Hate the little star in the skies
When it falls down my eyes

Hate this fragrance.... I got
Collecting flowers... in the journey
From my inner to your heart!

Hate the words!
I learned... from the love...
Beats in the heart
When it whispers in my thoughts!

Hate the SONG of our soul!
Ever singing
' Where we unite......
' There is life
' There is fate'

You can hate!


Comments about Hate Me, If You Can by Ali Adamson

  • Ramesh Rai Ramesh Rai (8/22/2016 6:12:00 PM)

    Hate the hate. Life will be full of motion. (Report) Reply

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  • Unwritten Soul Unwritten Soul (8/6/2016 4:28:00 AM)

    A strong line! , hate is fine because it effortlessly can be done...but to love is more difficult because it is higher at many levels...so its okay if people hate us because it is the weakest thing they can do for us...at least they tried...but love is the best in this community/world. (Report) Reply

  • Nosheen Irfan Nosheen Irfan (7/26/2016 5:45:00 AM)

    A unique write by its structure and content. Enjoyed reading a lot. Hate me, if you can is a very magnetic title. It pulls the reader. Nice work. (Report) Reply

  • Akhtar Jawad Akhtar Jawad (4/3/2014 3:51:00 AM)

    Hate the SONG of our soul!
    Ever singing
    ' Where we unite......
    ' There is life
    ' There is fate'
    Universality of your poems is the need of time, good work. (Report) Reply

  • Amitava Sur Amitava Sur (2/2/2014 1:51:00 AM)

    It's a lovely song by it's content & structure...... loved it (Report) Reply

  • Shahzia Batool Shahzia Batool (12/27/2013 9:31:00 AM)

    composed with confidence! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Tirupathi Chandrupatla Tirupathi Chandrupatla (12/27/2013 4:28:00 AM)

    Where we unite
    There is life
    Then it is left for fate to decide. I care, even if you don't. Beautifully delivered the message. Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Geetha Jayakumar Geetha Jayakumar (12/25/2013 8:35:00 AM)

    Beautiful write Ali. How can one hate after reading such a beautiful poem. Heartfelt. Loved reading it. (Report) Reply

  • Free Bird Free Bird (12/21/2013 8:51:00 AM)

    wahh what a poem, like it ] (Report) Reply

  • Aldrich Suarez (5/23/2013 3:22:00 AM)

    haters are good! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! people who can remember you everyday hahahah (Report) Reply

  • Anthony Arias (7/29/2009 2:08:00 AM)

    Nice and full bodied. (Report) Reply

  • Lady Grace (6/9/2009 2:13:00 AM)

    hate me, but i can't do the same
    hate me but that was all i can give
    hate me for nothing left except tears
    hate me, ..I WILL NOT COMPLAIN..grace (Report) Reply

  • ****tamara Hanaring.****** , A Thought Mate, (5/28/2009 3:43:00 AM)

    a poem which filled by love..hate in ove mean more than love..well done (Report) Reply

  • ~....my Life Is My Poem....~ ~....my Life Is My Poem....~ (5/24/2009 2:49:00 PM)

    its touching........no one can hate u, such a good person.......ur poems have a lot hidden meanings......wonderful..! 10+++++ (Report) Reply

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/21/2009 9:09:00 AM)

    hate i sno answer dear.if hate was answerthentherewould havebeenchaos all over. good words and fineoratory...10 (Report) Reply

  • DaNa XxX (5/16/2009 12:54:00 AM)

    dear Ali..... what a lovely poem! ! ! im sure no one can hate such a great poet like you! ! ! keep doing your best... (Report) Reply

  • Ashraful Musaddeq Ashraful Musaddeq (5/14/2009 8:35:00 AM)

    A poem in a different style with nice content.
    10++ (Report) Reply

  • Uzma Jamil (5/12/2009 12:38:00 PM)

    ali life z here wd al its pains and pleasures.ur thoughts r interconnected wd the changing moods of inner and external atmosphere. (Report) Reply

  • salha kibwana (4/24/2009 6:30:00 AM)

    personification, amzain, , i love what i just read it made me smile...well um i have an idea name a theme that me and you could write on id love to see how one theme could branch of into different ideas...nyc one (Report) Reply

  • Melissa Pelletier (4/14/2009 8:50:00 AM)

    yes! well done, love it! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, February 4, 2009

Poem Edited: Tuesday, December 17, 2013


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