Ali Adamson


How Can I Count! - Poem by Ali Adamson

Words make fresh
When words are flowers
Words define paths
When they are stars
Precious they are
In hopelessness
Words bring life

Words are far
When one wants more
Words are sunset
At some sea shore

When words are stones
Hit so hard
Words do tear
When they are sword
Words create darkness
When they are fear
Words are poison
Beat till death
Drop by drop

Words of people
Flow to my ear
Words are same
The same I hear
How can I know!
Who is sincere!

O Great God! !
A moment of breath is how much life!
How many times... death is coming with a breath inside!
How can I count! !


Comments about How Can I Count! by Ali Adamson

  • Geetha Jayakumar (8/20/2016 9:47:00 AM)


    Words are precious like our breathe. We cannot count either of them.When we loose we realise its worth.
    Beautiful write. Loved the ink.
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  • Unwritten Soul (8/14/2016 11:56:00 AM)


    Beautiful, words are the bricks that the world we making surround us, with love it make us stay in peace and with mad lines it change life to be crazily uneasy... And with words also we can convey what heart wanted to tell not only just keep the feeling inside... How beautiful world is because of great words, and they born from mind that think and heart that has the beauty... Lovely work Ali (Report) Reply

  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (7/27/2016 3:46:00 AM)


    Brilliant write, nicely conceptualized. Thanks for sharing this wonderful poem. (Report) Reply

  • Nosheen Irfan (7/26/2016 5:48:00 AM)


    Such a powerful piece of writing in your own characteristic style that is so appealing. I like how you have said so much in this single piece. (Report) Reply

  • Valsa George (7/20/2016 6:28:00 AM)


    Such meaningful write.... Yes, words have so much power! (Report) Reply

  • Heather Wilkins (9/21/2014 3:52:00 PM)


    words are very powerful tools. they can heal and they also can destroy careful thoughtful words are a must. love this poem (Report) Reply

  • Tirupathi Chandrupatla (12/27/2013 4:36:00 AM)


    Power of the words is enormous. That is what we see here. Life breath. Life ceases when it stops. We don't count how many times we breathe. Nice poem. (Report) Reply

  • Shahzia Batool (12/19/2013 12:31:00 PM)


    words have brought life here too...yes, how can i count...a simple question with all its profundity! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Susan Lacovara (12/8/2013 4:29:00 PM)


    With simple words, you have managed to convey a depth of thought provoking images. I very much appreciate the invitation to read your work. I believe we should all strive to speak KINDER words to one another, in the spirit of better understanding not only our differences, but more importantly, our similarities! Well done....PEACE (Report) Reply

  • (8/6/2009 8:01:00 AM)


    Wonderful descriptive writing Ali. I liked 'words define paths when they are stars' 'words are sunset at some sea shore. The last stanza is excellent and I thoroughly enjoyed this poem. Top marks
    Karin Anderson
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  • Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar (5/21/2009 8:36:00 AM)


    A moment of breath is how much life!
    A well coined line. good read. shan
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  • Ashraful Musaddeq (5/15/2009 8:06:00 AM)


    'O Great God! !
    A moment of breath is how much life!
    How many times... death is coming with a breath inside!
    How can I count! ! '

    Amazing lines 10++
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  • (5/12/2009 12:53:00 PM)


    u hav managed the poem vry well.........
    words r the one dat describe the inner thoughts of a person.
    i really liked the twist at the end.
    regards.
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  • (4/15/2009 10:24:00 AM)


    Remarkable the poem, the Word is the God... 10...
    Thank you for the sharing..
    All best,
    Tsira
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  • (4/6/2009 5:13:00 AM)


    gud one................. (Report) Reply

  • (4/5/2009 9:45:00 AM)


    Your a romantic poet with a dreamy idealistic heart, but, this poem is the best of all. Loved reading this and will read it often. Great poem, clear thinking and very good expression of feeling. Wishing you luck in your journey. (Report) Reply

  • (4/5/2009 9:28:00 AM)


    beautiful................. (Report) Reply

  • (4/3/2009 8:21:00 AM)


    WOW! ! , interesting poem and involving many meanings to words.....lovely! !
    Merna
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  • Yuri Duraan (4/3/2009 6:13:00 AM)


    Your images are strong and tie up together well.... it flows nicely and is very descriptive... well thought out. (Report) Reply

  • (3/30/2009 12:10:00 PM)


    such a strong poetic creation about words and your description...well said in a very elaborative format...10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, February 8, 2009



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