Ali Adamson


How Can I Count! - Poem by Ali Adamson

Words make fresh
When words are flowers
Words define paths
When they are stars
Precious they are
In hopelessness
Words bring life

Words are far
When one wants more
Words are sunset
At some sea shore

When words are stones
Hit so hard
Words do tear
When they are sword
Words create darkness
When they are fear
Words are poison
Beat till death
Drop by drop

Words of people
Flow to my ear
Words are same
The same I hear
How can I know!
Who is sincere!

O Great God! !
A moment of breath is how much life!
How many times... death is coming with a breath inside!
How can I count! !


Comments about How Can I Count! by Ali Adamson

  • Gold Star - 9,835 Points Heather Wilkins (9/21/2014 3:52:00 PM)

    words are very powerful tools. they can heal and they also can destroy careful thoughtful words are a must. love this poem (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 6,949 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (12/27/2013 4:36:00 AM)

    Power of the words is enormous. That is what we see here. Life breath. Life ceases when it stops. We don't count how many times we breathe. Nice poem. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 745 Points Shahzia Batool (12/19/2013 12:31:00 PM)

    words have brought life here too...yes, how can i count...a simple question with all its profundity! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,033 Points Susan Lacovara (12/8/2013 4:29:00 PM)

    With simple words, you have managed to convey a depth of thought provoking images. I very much appreciate the invitation to read your work. I believe we should all strive to speak KINDER words to one another, in the spirit of better understanding not only our differences, but more importantly, our similarities! Well done....PEACE (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Karin Anderson (sorry can't vote or comment) . (8/6/2009 8:01:00 AM)

    Wonderful descriptive writing Ali. I liked 'words define paths when they are stars' 'words are sunset at some sea shore. The last stanza is excellent and I thoroughly enjoyed this poem. Top marks
    Karin Anderson (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 4,569 Points Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar (5/21/2009 8:36:00 AM)

    A moment of breath is how much life!
    A well coined line. good read. shan (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 40 Points Ashraful Musaddeq (5/15/2009 8:06:00 AM)

    'O Great God! !
    A moment of breath is how much life!
    How many times... death is coming with a breath inside!
    How can I count! ! '

    Amazing lines 10++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Uzma Jamil (5/12/2009 12:53:00 PM)

    u hav managed the poem vry well.........
    words r the one dat describe the inner thoughts of a person.
    i really liked the twist at the end.
    regards. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Tsira Goge (4/15/2009 10:24:00 AM)

    Remarkable the poem, the Word is the God... 10...
    Thank you for the sharing..
    All best,
    Tsira (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Hadi Hussain Butt (4/6/2009 5:13:00 AM)

    gud one................. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Pandian Angelina (4/5/2009 9:45:00 AM)

    Your a romantic poet with a dreamy idealistic heart, but, this poem is the best of all. Loved reading this and will read it often. Great poem, clear thinking and very good expression of feeling. Wishing you luck in your journey. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Reshma Ramesh (4/5/2009 9:28:00 AM)

    beautiful................. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Merna Ibrahim (4/3/2009 8:21:00 AM)

    WOW! ! , interesting poem and involving many meanings to words.....lovely! !
    Merna (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 57 Points Yuri Duraan (4/3/2009 6:13:00 AM)

    Your images are strong and tie up together well.... it flows nicely and is very descriptive... well thought out. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Catrina Heart (3/30/2009 12:10:00 PM)

    such a strong poetic creation about words and your description...well said in a very elaborative format...10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Greenwolfe 1962 (3/30/2009 12:01:00 PM)

    I understood the whole thing up until the last stanza. The last stanza appears to
    be made up of questions but they end in exclamations. I don't really understand
    that. The second thing I don't understand is the sudden change of topic from
    words to breath. I just don't see the connection between them. At least, not in
    the context presented. A good discussion until the last stanza.

    GW62 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Soumia Benmechiche (3/16/2009 4:16:00 PM)

    When words are stones, hit so hard.I liked it so much especially these.Thank you for sharing dear friend poet.
    Best wishes (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Soumia Benmechiche (3/14/2009 12:22:00 PM)

    Very nice poem I liked it so much (a ten) please read my poems
    Keep on writing (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Yana Djin (3/14/2009 5:48:00 AM)

    i like this poem a lot. very concise and devoid of unnecessary sentimentality. thanks. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Mimi Fakhira (3/13/2009 10:52:00 AM)

    So meaningful, your words are arranged in a beautiful way indeed. Precious and poetic to my mind...10. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, February 8, 2009



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