Ali Adamson


Heart, love tones


When a heart is broken
with no noise here on earth
but in the skies
That is love!

When eyes are heavy
with the salty tide
tears... not flowing out
wetting you inside
That is love!

While listening harsh with an ease
some words so soft make you freeze
That is love!

There is frankness as much as lie
but there is space
hard to melt the ice on lips
but all it is written on your face
That is love!

While leaving you...
Life... no more kind
A smile twinkles in your mind
That is love!

While going there...
when it is due
where death is sad
waiting for you
That is life!

Submitted: Wednesday, March 18, 2009

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  • Gold Star - 5,724 Points Col Muhamad Khalid Khan (11/15/2014 2:54:00 AM)

    When eyes are heavy
    with the salty tide
    tears... not flowing out
    wetting you inside
    That is love!
    An excellent love poem covering all idiosyncracies of love and life.Well done 10/10
    Col Muhammad Khalid Khan (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 9,695 Points Heather Wilkins (6/26/2014 10:01:00 PM)

    a beautiful poem about what love means. so well written and touching, enjoyed (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 22,828 Points Akhtar Jawad (6/15/2014 3:06:00 AM)

    Your love is divine love and your life is not this life but an unending life that comes after death. It's a nice poem. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,508 Points * Sunprincess * (3/14/2014 5:57:00 PM)

    ...........nice...enjoyed.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 415 Points Yasmeen Khan (12/30/2013 10:39:00 PM)

    A deep and philosophical poem that ends in a paradox. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 605 Points Shahzia Batool (12/27/2013 9:38:00 AM)

    when Joyce' protagonist discovers something new after using the inborn logic, he utters like you have uttered...
    That is love, that is life...
    Epiphany in simple terms! ! ! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 4,761 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (12/27/2013 4:31:00 AM)

    Life had never been kind to lovers. Love's many definitions nicely explained. Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 26,677 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/2/2009 7:23:00 AM)

    When a heart is broken
    with no noise here on earth
    but in the skies
    That is love! .. yes when it is broken u look towards sky and curse and thhink and write so many things.... but beautiful write here...10

    read mine butterflies around and mary to marry along with o, mother (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 10 Points Ejaz Khan (6/1/2009 5:49:00 AM)

    That's love, that's life, the later comprising the former, a beautiful poem, you have both rythm and power of thought, a good combination. Press ahead but in a cautious way, giving yourself time to ponder deeply before reflecting. I liked your poetry, keep it up, without falling a victim of praise.
    Best wishes and regards
    Ejaz (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Shashendra Amalshan (5/28/2009 3:46:00 AM)

    you ve expressed it very nicely indeed Ali...love and life...you can make this life a heaven if you look at it with love..but it's easier said than done..cause so hard to fix the broken hearts..

    cheers
    brother 10++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Uzma Jamil (5/11/2009 1:49:00 PM)

    Adamson u hav done a great job, it makes me hard 2 comment on ur true and fair depiction of life.where hav u gathred such bitterness of love u hav written more dan expected.similar feelngs can b gatherd but words brought hereforth r difficult.ur power of specticular insight z marvellous! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,281 Points Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar (5/6/2009 8:34:00 AM)

    more mature than your age and more passionate befitting your age. i admire your vision. shan 10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Karin Anderson (sorry can't vote or comment) . (5/1/2009 6:43:00 AM)

    This poem is rich with images and the last stanza is particularly brilliant with its twist on the theme of love. Top marks Karin Anderson (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 277 Points Ruth Walters (4/30/2009 12:47:00 PM)

    mmmmm I can drift away into my own thoughts with these words of yours.....

    Ruthy (Report) Reply

  • Rookie salha kibwana (4/26/2009 4:14:00 AM)

    omg...some poets are just born to do it..this is unbelieveble beautiful to read.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Samanyan Lakshminarayanan (4/24/2009 1:41:00 AM)

    THAT WAS A BEAUTY..LOVELY FLOW (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Surayya Abbas (4/19/2009 2:56:00 AM)

    lovely poem with very strong emotion.Nicely written. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Hadi Hussain Butt (4/6/2009 5:06:00 AM)

    Its simply beautiful, especially the 4th stanza (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 26 Points Fiona Davidson (4/1/2009 1:07:00 PM)

    This is truly a beautiful poem Ali....so lovely...10++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Maryam Khan (3/31/2009 9:15:00 AM)

    Wow...I started reading and couldn't stop...This is filled with so much strong emotion. You did an amazing job with every aspect of this piece; such a heart felt poem...
    Keep it up! (Report) Reply

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