Eyes: White-Holes Poem by Muhammad Ali

lovely............. thnx for sharing

oh..its very very good thanx for the share its a tenner cheers

oh..its very very good thanx for the share its a tenner cheers

Excellent piece Ali....10++++

very nice composition.10

I sink in eyes... for ages... for lives going to die coming to life...imagination........ vision.. liked ur last sentence... when i return...... coffee.. such an imagination.. thank you. tony brahmin

I enjoy your writing.

This is tremendous. I've read and reread this several times, and each time I am struck by a different set of images. This could involve the imagination....the power of the word to create the ideal vision, teh desire, and then the fade away. Once the coffee arrives, there is the need to put down the word and return to daily living. I shall have to come back to this gem again and again.

A profound write and I don't think I have understood it in all its depth! My inability...... I admit !

Extraordinary. This image caught my imagination and I do not think I will be forgetting it any time soon! ! ! ! - - - - - when I do read few letters stick on your lips 10+++++++++++++