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Ali Adamson


Dimensions


I become pale
leaving my tree
falling to ground
I love my life
...

I am so hard
staying on the road
heavy bodies passing over me
I am not cracking
I love my life
...

You arrange me in your hair
sweet scent revolving around you
till the evening...
I love my life
...

I am the script on the layers
what the waves trying to convey
till I splash on the brink
I love my life
...

I am the junction between day and night
your coffee time
will be here tommorow
may you live millions evenings
I love the Life!

Submitted: Saturday, February 14, 2009
Edited: Wednesday, January 01, 2014

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  • Gold Star - 12,167 Points Valsa George (2/3/2014 2:18:00 AM)

    Though my existence is as transitory as a flower or the script on the waves, I don't mind and I love my life as long as I can give a little joy to others! A poem with profound thoughts! ! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,585 Points Sallam Yassin (12/31/2013 9:37:00 PM)

    There is great postiveness and spirit of life
    With beautiful images
    And senese important for new year and new life to start
    Happy new year ali (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 416 Points Shahzia Batool (12/27/2013 9:33:00 AM)

    I am the script on the layers
    what the waves trying to convey
    till I splash on the brink
    I love my life....

    a poem with substance in the lines! ! ! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 3,503 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (12/27/2013 4:23:00 AM)

    May you live long. I keep moving close. I wish to live long seeing you all along. Beautiful poem expressing love. Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 10 Points Ravi A (5/12/2009 11:20:00 AM)

    I am the script on the layers
    what the waves trying to convey
    till I splash on the brink
    I love my life............. This sums up the poem. A good depth. A good message. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Maitreyee Joshi (4/21/2009 5:28:00 AM)

    we have different dimensions to our nature.our life is short, but, all the same, we all love it.your philosophy touches me.10+ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Yelena M. (4/13/2009 1:10:00 AM)

    'I am the script on the layers
    what the waves trying to convey
    till I splash on the brink
    I love my life' - these are lines with unique impact.
    Adore the general feel created by this poem, I agree with Faiz, here is a very sensitive and subtle craft.Keep on!
    Best wishes.
    A. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Hadi Hussain Butt (4/6/2009 4:59:00 AM)

    Ali u write so gud, three S for u, Sensitive, Subjective and Subtle. You have mentioned those thender gestures and feelings which people usually miss, just keep it up :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Mimi Fakhira (3/13/2009 10:57:00 AM)

    Enchanting and beautiful
    The lines are enjoyable to read
    Full of realisation..
    10.

    Regards,
    MIMI (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Chitra - (3/13/2009 5:46:00 AM)

    life and its dimensions, no matter what we cling on to it..we face it.
    nice poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Seema Aarella (2/14/2009 4:44:00 AM)

    very intricate meaning...every dimension dealt with care...a flexibility of character is seen as life changes and u endure it with a grin.....loved this one! ! ! !
    your love of life is asserted in undeniable clarity! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

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