Ali Adamson


Dimensions - Poem by Ali Adamson

I become pale
leaving my tree
falling to ground
I love my life
...

I am so hard
staying on the road
heavy bodies passing over me
I am not cracking
I love my life
...

You arrange me in your hair
sweet scent revolving around you
till the evening...
I love my life
...

I am the script on the layers
what the waves trying to convey
till I splash on the brink
I love my life
...

I am the junction between day and night
your coffee time
will be here tommorow
may you live millions evenings
I love the Life!


Comments about Dimensions by Ali Adamson

  • Bharati Nayak (5/10/2017 10:18:00 AM)


    Wow- - absolutely lovely poem- - - - -You, a true lover of life- -To quote a few lines- - - -
    I become pale
    leaving my tree
    falling to ground
    I love my life
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    - - - - - - - - - - -
    I am the junction between day and night
    your coffee time
    will be here tommorow
    may you live millions evenings
    I love the Life!
    - - - - - - - - - -To my poem list.
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  • Susan Williams (5/7/2017 3:01:00 PM)


    Ah-ha! ! ! A poem that I have not yet read! ! ! My dear friend, please write more poems- they are eagerly awaited!
    I am a reader of your poems- -and I love my life! ! I must post while I can- this page is flipping back and forth
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  • (8/13/2016 4:58:00 AM)


    A beautiful write. Life is not always kind. It does not last but love life as long as you live and give happiness to others. Great thoughts expressed beautifully. (Report) Reply

  • Akhtar Jawad (7/20/2016 8:08:00 PM)


    A thought poem, we are born to die, let us spread as much color and aroma as much we can, and add some color to the garden in that we were born. (Report) Reply

  • Valsa George (2/3/2014 2:18:00 AM)


    Though my existence is as transitory as a flower or the script on the waves, I don't mind and I love my life as long as I can give a little joy to others! A poem with profound thoughts! ! (Report) Reply

  • Sallam Yassin (12/31/2013 9:37:00 PM)


    There is great postiveness and spirit of life
    With beautiful images
    And senese important for new year and new life to start
    Happy new year ali
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  • S.zaynab Kamoonpuri (12/28/2013 1:53:00 PM)


    It seems on behalf of a flower. A talkin flower is a brilliant poetic idea! Wah. (Report) Reply

  • S.zaynab Kamoonpuri (12/28/2013 1:52:00 PM)


    It seems on behalf of a flower. A talkin flower is a brilliant poetic idea! Wah. (Report) Reply

  • Shahzia Batool (12/27/2013 9:33:00 AM)


    I am the script on the layers
    what the waves trying to convey
    till I splash on the brink
    I love my life....

    a poem with substance in the lines! ! ! ! ! !
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  • Tirupathi Chandrupatla (12/27/2013 4:23:00 AM)


    May you live long. I keep moving close. I wish to live long seeing you all along. Beautiful poem expressing love. Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • (5/14/2009 8:22:00 AM)


    A vivid and beautiful poem. Your emotions spill through right to the very end. Great work!
    10 Karin Anderson
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  • Ravi A (5/12/2009 11:20:00 AM)


    I am the script on the layers
    what the waves trying to convey
    till I splash on the brink
    I love my life............. This sums up the poem. A good depth. A good message.
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  • (4/24/2009 7:22:00 AM)


    Your use of dimensions is so cool! (Report) Reply

  • (4/21/2009 5:28:00 AM)


    we have different dimensions to our nature.our life is short, but, all the same, we all love it.your philosophy touches me.10+ (Report) Reply

  • (4/13/2009 1:10:00 AM)


    'I am the script on the layers
    what the waves trying to convey
    till I splash on the brink
    I love my life' - these are lines with unique impact.
    Adore the general feel created by this poem, I agree with Faiz, here is a very sensitive and subtle craft.Keep on!
    Best wishes.
    A.
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  • (4/6/2009 4:59:00 AM)


    Ali u write so gud, three S for u, Sensitive, Subjective and Subtle. You have mentioned those thender gestures and feelings which people usually miss, just keep it up :) (Report) Reply

  • (3/13/2009 10:57:00 AM)


    Enchanting and beautiful
    The lines are enjoyable to read
    Full of realisation..
    10.

    Regards,
    MIMI
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  • (3/13/2009 5:46:00 AM)


    life and its dimensions, no matter what we cling on to it..we face it.
    nice poem
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  • (2/20/2009 12:43:00 AM)


    GREAT WORK DONE ALI! !
    nice flow..beautifully write..
    10/10
    with lov
    sumi
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  • Sadiqullah Khan (2/17/2009 1:16:00 AM)


    well written Adomson, keep the good work going.10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, February 14, 2009

Poem Edited: Wednesday, January 1, 2014


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