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(15 th April 1967 / , , RANCHI,)

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Ugly Legs of Peacock

Once, I danced;
Under the cloudless canopy,
With a dream of yours,
What a joyous moment it was!
I danced and danced like a peacock,
Thought, you will come....
Ah! panorama of yours, blinded,
Spoting such a joy,
Cloud came and poured,
Clothed were wet yet I was dry
I Opened my eyes,
You were not present!
Abandoned the dance,
And in grief, cried I.
O disappointment,
'You the ugly legs of peacock'

Submitted: Sunday, May 19, 2013
Edited: Wednesday, August 28, 2013

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  • Pardaz Aftab (11/5/2013 10:21:00 PM)

    A great imagination...

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  • Ramesh Rai (10/22/2013 6:31:00 AM)

    very natural n excellent write

  • Arif Khan (9/19/2013 11:46:00 PM)

    EXCELLENT, wonderful poem of love, hope, joy & disappointment

  • Ruby Mostazir (9/17/2013 11:51:00 PM)

    ah i catch you here on contest love to vote on your poem.........Excellent!

  • Aftab Alam Khursheed (9/17/2013 11:59:00 AM)

    It is my humble request to all PH's honorable members to read and comment and Vote THANK YOU

  • Ozark Mountain Homegrown (8/29/2013 1:55:00 PM)

    This is a very wonderful poem of love, hope, joy & disappointment..It brought me to the moment as though I were there watching...I enjoyed this very much!

  • Yasmeen Khan (5/21/2013 2:41:00 AM)

    I have read somewhere that during his ecstatic dance when peacock looks at his feet, he cries. Maybe you have this myth in your mind but a beautiful symbolic poem has been created. In life ugliness and beauty, disappointment and hope go hand in hand.

  • David Wood (5/20/2013 7:36:00 AM)

    Vivid imgary and colourful as a peacock.

  • Kanav Justa (5/20/2013 12:45:00 AM)

    a great imagination, , , , nice write, , ,

  • Bobby Wynn (5/19/2013 4:32:00 PM)

    Proud as a peacock! we say.

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