Aftab Alam

Gold Star - 39,733 Points (15 th April 1967 / , , RANCHI,)

Ugly Legs of Peacock Poem by Aftab Alam


Once, I danced;
Under the cloudless canopy,
With a dream of yours,
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  • Bronze Star - 2,841 Points Darlene Walsh (1/16/2015 11:38:00 AM)

    Unrequited love, especially when you work so hard to be loved, can cause great pain and sadness. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 25,823 Points Akhtar Jawad (10/2/2014 12:09:00 AM)

    Peacocks ugly legs are helpful for him, he can dance, run and defend himself with it.a nice symbolic poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 79 Points Partha Shaha (9/24/2014 11:26:00 AM)

    very nice (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 21,290 Points Chinedu Dike (9/23/2014 9:29:00 PM)

    Very catchy title. What a disappointment in the bliss of love! A lovely poem. Thanks for sharing. Please have a look at my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,782 Points Points Of View (9/15/2014 7:05:00 AM)

    Oh sad!someday u find a lovely peacock who wants to dance with you...lol (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 105 Points Raihana Abdul Jabbar (9/3/2014 2:04:00 PM)

    Love must hurt. Otherwise it isn't love. Ma sha Allah... Loved the images created.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Pardaz Aftab (11/5/2013 10:21:00 PM)

    A great imagination... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 12,234 Points Ramesh Rai (10/22/2013 6:31:00 AM)

    very natural n excellent write (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Arif Khan (9/19/2013 11:46:00 PM)

    EXCELLENT, wonderful poem of love, hope, joy & disappointment (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 80 Points Ruby Mostazir (9/17/2013 11:51:00 PM)

    ah i catch you here on contest love to vote on your poem.........Excellent! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 39,733 Points Aftab Alam Khursheed (9/17/2013 11:59:00 AM)

    It is my humble request to all PH's honorable members to read and comment and Vote THANK YOU (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Ozark Mountain Homegrown (8/29/2013 1:55:00 PM)

    This is a very wonderful poem of love, hope, joy & disappointment..It brought me to the moment as though I were there watching...I enjoyed this very much! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 469 Points Yasmeen Khan (5/21/2013 2:41:00 AM)

    I have read somewhere that during his ecstatic dance when peacock looks at his feet, he cries. Maybe you have this myth in your mind but a beautiful symbolic poem has been created. In life ugliness and beauty, disappointment and hope go hand in hand. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 339 Points David Wood (5/20/2013 7:36:00 AM)

    Vivid imgary and colourful as a peacock. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,063 Points Kanav Justa (5/20/2013 12:45:00 AM)

    a great imagination, , , , nice write, , , (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 208 Points R.j. Wynn (5/19/2013 4:32:00 PM)

    Proud as a peacock! we say. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 80 Points Ruby Mostazir (5/19/2013 11:51:00 AM)

    Congrats! you made century wid a nice 1. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 80 Points Ruby Mostazir (5/19/2013 11:30:00 AM)

    beautiful broken heart poem, i love dis.: -) (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,523 Points Diane Hine (5/19/2013 4:59:00 AM)

    If he didn't have those fine functional legs, he'd be sitting in the mud.
    It must have been a beautiful dance! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,031 Points Wahab Abdul (5/19/2013 4:44:00 AM)

    good poem in good diction...a poem of disappointment....love this too (Report) Reply



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