Aftab Alam

Gold Star - 37,621 Points (15 th April 1967 / , , RANCHI,)

Uncertain -A Certain


O my pearly fate! Why ye keepeth the dew?
Through you I see the beautiful world
How can I see? It is totally blurred

My thought! Fetch me some lovely dreams to face
That must kindle sparks within my darkness,
My torn dreams ye must sew! make it His grace,

Stars and Heaven with bright dark canopy!
Laugh not on me, it is only a childish mirth
I know, it is known to me since my birth.

And moon! Like a highwayman, you mislead
Stop mesmerizing me, 'tis not a warn but a plead
Don't make Love a word of deceit, a Shame


Spark of sun alone will kill you all
My fate! You must remove the curtain,
Wanted to make uncertain -a certain

Submitted: Friday, May 17, 2013
Edited: Thursday, October 02, 2014

Topic of this poem: grief


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I never give up the hope though suffered a lot, always - loss loss loss, Lord helped a lot and HE is ever helping. at least I am Alive to write to enjoy to be with you, Glory to be Allah...must comment

Comments about this poem (Uncertain -A Certain by Aftab Alam )

  • Gold Star - 22,384 Points Akhtar Jawad (10/2/2014 12:13:00 AM)

    Spark of sun alone will kill you all
    My fate! You must remove the curtain,
    Wanted to make uncertain –a certain
    It's amazing Aftab. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,727 Points Sallam Yassin (5/18/2013 11:49:00 AM)

    the true is beyond the curtain
    only heart with faith
    truly can see
    you blessed bro.. and your word too/ thanks (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 7,260 Points Neela Nath (5/17/2013 8:48:00 PM)

    Wonderful poem on your suffering soul's experience.Never give up.Great! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 208 Points R.j. Wynn (5/17/2013 12:57:00 PM)

    My pleasure to comment on such work that it inspires me so. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 2,665 Points Wahab Abdul (5/17/2013 10:59:00 AM)

    this is a clean poetry..with lovely diction... love it... and giving you..10 (Report) Reply

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