Treasure Island

Jameel Ahmed Ansari


The Lovely Start


The moment you stepped in my gloomy life,
The moment u turned my smiles alive,

I felt myself on a lovely ride,
My heart got filled with the greatest delight.

I started flying like a shooting star,
My pains got vanished and my sufferings reduced,
I asked myself was it a new start?

You brought my lifeless soul alive,
You made my ending hopes survive,
I asked myself was it worth a start?

You brought those giggles and smiles within,
My sorrows started to sink in,
I asked myself was it an end for the dark?

You made me feel the brightest star,
And led me to the Milky Way,
I asked myself if I was really this far.

Submitted: Monday, July 20, 2009

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  • majid Alsaady (2/27/2011 10:50:00 AM)

    they say love makes miracles so no wonder u changed / its a active and poignant
    i like to read more of ur work in time. thanks 4 sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Kudakwashe Roak Mutama (2/27/2011 5:45:00 AM)

    only a person who is in love can understand this...

    hey, this poem is very enlightening... you can actually feel the new start when reading it. just like someone who has been lost who is finally found. this is a lovely poem and nayone can relate to it.

    keep it up! ! ! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rekha Mandagere (2/23/2011 5:25:00 AM)

    Highly inspiring! Love can move the mountains and gives confidence for one's existence.Well written. (Report) Reply

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