Shahzia Batool

Veteran Poet - 1,483 Points (Pakistan)

On Life! - Poem by Shahzia Batool

A grim battlefield
a delightful playground
a school of learning!

Topic(s) of this poem: life

Comments about On Life! by Shahzia Batool

  • Gold Star - 6,656 Points Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (4/13/2014 1:31:00 AM)

    Simple but swelling in the sea of significance. A powerful perspective on life and its meaning. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 18,825 Points Amitava Sur (4/11/2014 11:16:00 PM)

    Very precise three liner but most difficult to follow carry on....... very nice.

    Shazia - I just wrote my 100 th poem A drop on a lotus leaf, pl, read with comments. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 122 Points Yash Shinde (4/8/2014 11:48:00 PM)

    .........a lovely three liner........says so much in few words!

    ..I cordially invite you to read my poem- ' bosom thee....I'll rise''..and ''never look like one''..plzz share your views in comments.....regards (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,738 Points Dinesh Nair (3/25/2014 5:51:00 AM)

    ...and a tale told by many idiots! A beautiful three liner (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 133 Points Allemagne Roßmann (3/24/2014 8:24:00 PM)

    Words of a teacher as always....I remember back school days as also universities- -teachers and professors somehow share your three-liner.Teachers do not finance students.For me though it is/were another.The battlefield enemies were teachers themselves and so the playground they made increasingly difficult.When I faltered steps because of lack of guidance and finance the problem-they do not and did not help the way they should for respect.Instead they went on like stray cats- -wherever money students they were there.So they were basically professionals who took to teaching.Not teachers like Chanakya, Jesus or Mohammad or Lord Krishna.

    So made it all alone good.And in the end they came and clicked photos with me to give me a feeling that my astounding grades are only because of their guidances.Thats how life taught about people and specially teachers who had been cold war enemies most of the time.

    Great write though.Impelled me to get back on those strides and the self-propelling mind to take on challenges in life. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,092 Points Kanav Justa (3/21/2014)

    .. in such short lines.. you wrote everything about life.... remarkable... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 19,808 Points Ramesh Rai (3/15/2014 9:20:00 AM)

    Yes three lines enough to tackle the life great words. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,805 Points Md Asadullah (3/15/2014 9:08:00 AM)

    In three lines you have said the truth about this life, Nice one shazia aapi :) (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 11,527 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (3/15/2014 8:43:00 AM)

    A school of learning among other things. Beautiful words about life. Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 813 Points Muhammad Ali (3/15/2014 7:42:00 AM)

    nice thoughts of mood... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, March 15, 2014

Poem Edited: Saturday, March 15, 2014

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