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You!

I got a chance to meet You
in the feel of a moment
gripped in the crystalline abstraction
of a diamond bonding…

at my first sight,
a young sheep,
a kitten,
or a chic You looked to me;
but as the moments passed by,
I kept on exploring You
and found to my sheer surprise
a ripe mind,
a deep thought,
a razor-pen You kept and still keep…
a keen observer,
a bright writer,
a sharp critic;

I felt your soul like a lighted candle
Sometimes kindling the light
though sometimes idly burning away
but always on the flickering flame
fighting against the bold blows
and strokes of critical winds…
I felt the hardening of your heart
by constant fighting
within and without…

You made me up and happy
You made me down and sad
but never annoyed me
I likened you to Stephen D.
I likened you to the bard of fancy
I wished to write an ode to You…

Reading You is a wonder feel,
One might feel sitting either
in a submarine
or a space-shuttle..
you have always been so dead sure
beyond being challenged ever…
I witnessed deaths of ego hard
With no offence, with no blame
People let you rule their moods
Willingly...

for how they can file an F.I.R
when in all crystalline way
they love the killer…! ! !

Submitted: Sunday, September 29, 2013
Edited: Thursday, October 31, 2013


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  • Geetha Jayakumar (11/21/2013 4:18:00 AM)

    A fascinating and intriguing write. Left me puzzled...Lovely poem.

    2 person liked.
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  • Ramesh Rai (11/12/2013 5:02:00 PM)

    I adore your emotion as well as your write.

  • Rekha Mandagere (11/8/2013 11:36:00 PM)

    What a strong relationship between exists between an individual and his ego is always a puzzle, yet to be solved. It might give comfort sometimes but most of the times it makes us sad. The narration technique is superb. Nice work Shazia,

  • marvin brato (11/5/2013 10:47:00 PM)

    Meaningful... enjoyed the read!

  • Patricia Grantham (11/2/2013 11:51:00 PM)

    I enjoyed this poignant write. Really lifted me up to the skies.
    I must come back down to earth now. You is so lucky Enjoyed.

  • Rigzin Namgyal (10/7/2013 7:12:00 AM)

    ..a poetic sonata..that only a poetess of Shahzia's caliber can produce..poetry at its very epitome..
    ..loved it..i will give you a perfect 10 for this brilliant display of writing..

  • Abhishek Mishra (10/5/2013 12:35:00 AM)

    Amazingly composed poem..it deserves 10+++

  • Aftab Alam Khursheed (10/4/2013 3:32:00 AM)

    wel composition, nice observation and a lovely poem

  • Heather Wilkins (10/3/2013 11:00:00 AM)

    beautiful writing Shahzia enjoyed the write

  • Queeny Gona (10/3/2013 10:46:00 AM)

    Ahh! Less words have I to reciprocate after reading such an amazing verse...... The ending is no less interesting as the rest of the read dear Poet pal.

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