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A Child's Supplication!

O Maker of this universe! ! ! ! !
Sought in silence, prose and verse!

Teach me Lord to sing Thy Praise
On strings of these my humble lays

O Knower of all black and white
Pour on us Thy heaven's light

Thou knowst our deep folds and layers
Unto Thee I send my prayers

Bless the sick with healthy life
Help the ones who are in strife

Grow us strong to serve the nation
with progress, peace and education

Ignorance sweeps us with its might
Help us remove it by our light

Leave us not our Gracious God
Save us from all evils odd

Grace our minds with blessings Thine
We wish to stay forever Thine

Desert us not, O worthy Lord
The path is thorny and so broad

Our hands are seeking for Thy mercy
Bless us withThy boundless mercy

Bless my parents and my teachers
Friends and siblings, all Thy creatures!

Ameen! ! !

Submitted: Tuesday, May 07, 2013
Edited: Tuesday, May 07, 2013


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Professor Shakeel Amjad sb,
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  • Brian Johnston (4/1/2014 1:09:00 AM)

    And less you become like a child, you shall not enter into the Kingdom of Heaven. I certainly am not God, but Shahzia, it seems to me your heart is already in the right place.

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  • Soulful Heart (3/3/2014 11:21:00 AM)

    A sincere prayer devoid of all malice......rememberd the dua lab pe aati hai dua banke tamanna meri...sweet n simple

  • Adeline Foster (2/20/2014 3:29:00 PM)

    Thank you for all of your lovely comments on my poems. I too have enjoyed yours.
    I truly enjoyed - A Child’s Supplication! The flow is so exact and pleasurable even musical. May I make a suggestion? There is only one ‘e’ in amen. The third stanza could read - Pour upon us heavenly light –
    Only to keep the meter flowing. I liked the way you used a capital letter for the word Knower. As you see the teacher in me can’t be hidden.
    Adeline

  • Faria Aslam (11/20/2013 8:16:00 AM)

    its a very nice nd humble suplication
    may Allah fulfill it
    Ameen

  • Ramesh Rai (7/5/2013 10:17:00 PM)

    Grace our minds with blessings
    to read each line is like to sip nectar of heaven

  • Farah Ilyas (5/26/2013 2:51:00 PM)

    Aamin....poem is cute in its opus....a lovely poem with its rhyme & rhythmic effect...Sound enchanting

  • Passionate Reader (5/25/2013 2:38:00 PM)

    fabulous! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! it's a cute prayer! ! ! ! ! ! ! stay blessed!

  • Bobby Wynn (5/14/2013 3:10:00 PM)

    Wooooooooooo! thats a lot of loving.

  • Tribhawan Kaul (5/12/2013 4:32:00 AM)

    This ought to be every child's prayer. Great write Shahzia.

  • Neela Nath (5/11/2013 10:46:00 PM)

    A wonderful prayer.The rhyme scheme ab ab is nicely used.

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