Million Daffodils Poem by Shahzia Batool

Million Daffodils

Rating: 4.5


My vision is the azure sky
And dreams are Paradise
My dwelling is behind the wall
I’m hidden to probing eyes
My nature unpredictable
My favourite subject Moods
I listen to silent melodies
And relish simple foods
Sunset is my favorite poem
Daily writ by Nature
Every day I keep on learning
Life is my teacher
I’m fond of reading worthy poems
And wish for writing so
My muse is mostly kind to me
And fills my pen with flow
I do not know the heavy words
But choose the simple ones
My themes are taken from the life
Of flowers and of guns
If journey stops on the way
And then comes my Exit
Requesting you do not forget
My simple, tender writs
Being complex as Algebra sums
Best minds will solve me right
So take care in your ways of life
And do not take me light! ! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
David Wood 27 May 2013

Well thought through and wise words. A good write.

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Passionate Reader 28 May 2013

A beautiful descriptive poem! ! ! Your poems are a beautiful amalgamation of rhythm and rhyme and this one is another intensely expressive poem. I’m hidden to probing eyes My nature unpredictable My favourite subject Moods I listen to silent melodies Lovely lines especially “I listen to silent melodies”. As you said, I do not know the heavy words But choose the simple ones Yes, though the words you use are simple but every line has a deeper meaning. The poem is not as simple as it looks, it has deeper meanings and every line can be interpreted at so many levels. The way you put one idea after the other, from the start till the end, is brilliant. GREAT FLOW! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! The last lines grabbed my attention and are praiseworthy! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Being complex as Algebra sums Best minds will solve me right So take care in your ways of life And do not take me light! ! ! These lines are the whole crux of the poem! ! ! ! ! ! Impressive work! ! ! ! Loved it! ! !

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Robert Green 05 June 2013

So many comments :) And do not take me light! ! ! If they read you and learn you no one will.

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Valerie Dohren 27 May 2013

Excellent poem Shahzia, well thought out and very well written. Well done.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 27 May 2013

Seems me burst of thought in calm and placid mood lovely and... do not take me light! ! ! bold thank

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Yasmin Khan 01 July 2015

Your muse is really kind to you that let you pen down so nice a verse we enjoy and admire. Am I a best mind to solve you right, dear friend? :)

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Ramesh Rai 23 September 2014

A cascading flow in writing and sounds in rythem of words.

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Sun Shine 26 June 2013

Best minds will solve me right true! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Connie Yost 09 June 2013

You are beautiful, unpredictable, formidable, exciting and a wonderful POET.

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Heather Wilkins 08 June 2013

Every day I keep on learning, life is my teacher so true. nice write.

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