Aftab Alam

Gold Star - 35,024 Points (15 th April 1967 / , , RANCHI,)

Modern Society


Her beauty on the carpet of youth having a jive
Like honey drips in spring from the waxy hive
What Youth but infirm, all are dying for a drop
Carelessly with hellish gait moved without prop

And there curious fledgling having a tasty watch
As they are in a club for race with lass in a yacht
She swaggered with sexy dagger and killed many
Nudity of humanity on backless honey tyranny

‘Whether it is a Advertisement, Media, a Party,
Lady youth is displayed to make all senseless.
All are the rapist including society that oppose
Wrap thy body like an angel, ye the boon on earth’

The curse of Lord on all, all have seen
One behind the bar other raped, on screen
Watched and spit on this act and reacted
Shame! Much dirt society has accepted!

Submitted: Friday, May 24, 2013
Edited: Friday, May 24, 2013

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I consider rape is the outcome of the society / modernity plays a game of vulgarity that is satanic

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  • Veteran Poet - 2,532 Points Patricia Grantham (5/31/2013 8:37:00 PM)

    A good write. Society has turned the other cheek on the
    right way to treat women. Women have often gotten treated
    unfairly. Society is not as modern as it is supposed to be.
    Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 8,361 Points Edward Kofi Louis (5/27/2013 6:23:00 AM)

    This world is really sick! ! With illegal lust painted nicely than true love. it is very sad; but, many are those who go that way. A very nice piec eof work. Thanks for sharing it with us.

    E.K.L. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 175 Points Vizard Dhawan (5/26/2013 9:12:00 PM)

    nice topic to write a poem on
    sir, do read my poems and comment if you find it fair to read poems of a seventeen years old boy. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 175 Points Vizard Dhawan (5/26/2013 9:08:00 PM)

    nice topic to relate
    i appreciate u sir
    plz read my poems too and comment if you find it fair for reading the poems of a seventeen years old boy
    thanks. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 23,982 Points Gajanan Mishra (5/26/2013 7:03:00 AM)

    much dirt society has accepted, beautifully you have presented my dear poet, thanks a lot.10 (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 2,467 Points Wahab Abdul (5/24/2013 11:49:00 PM)

    the first line... along with the first stanza stands unmatched...great and cracking poem..10 marks.. (Report) Reply

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