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Aftab Alam

Gold Star - 33,788 Points (15 th April 1967 / , , RANCHI,)

Modern Society


Her beauty on the carpet of youth having a jive
Like honey drips in spring from the waxy hive
What Youth but infirm, all are dying for a drop
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I consider rape is the outcome of the society / modernity plays a game of vulgarity that is satanic

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  • Freshman - 2,239 Points Patricia Grantham (5/31/2013 8:37:00 PM)

    A good write. Society has turned the other cheek on the
    right way to treat women. Women have often gotten treated
    unfairly. Society is not as modern as it is supposed to be.
    Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 6,447 Points Edward Kofi Louis (5/27/2013 6:23:00 AM)

    This world is really sick! ! With illegal lust painted nicely than true love. it is very sad; but, many are those who go that way. A very nice piec eof work. Thanks for sharing it with us.

    E.K.L. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 175 Points Vizard Dhawan (5/26/2013 9:12:00 PM)

    nice topic to write a poem on
    sir, do read my poems and comment if you find it fair to read poems of a seventeen years old boy. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 175 Points Vizard Dhawan (5/26/2013 9:08:00 PM)

    nice topic to relate
    i appreciate u sir
    plz read my poems too and comment if you find it fair for reading the poems of a seventeen years old boy
    thanks. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 19,138 Points Gajanan Mishra (5/26/2013 7:03:00 AM)

    much dirt society has accepted, beautifully you have presented my dear poet, thanks a lot.10 (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 2,123 Points Wahab Abdul (5/24/2013 11:49:00 PM)

    the first line... along with the first stanza stands unmatched...great and cracking poem..10 marks.. (Report) Reply

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