(31st August,1995)

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Loss Unbearable, Loss Irrepearable

The death of a twelve year old,
Her sister shed tears,
But the body was cold,
Loss Unbearable, Loss Irrepearable.

She felt all had lost hope,
It was her fault,
'I let go the rope! '
Loss Unbearable, Loss Irrepearable.

'I should have pulled her up'
'I lost grip'
'I should'nt have given up! '
Loss Unbearable, Loss Irrepearable.

'You trusted me! '
'And there is no reason....'
' No you shouldn't have, see? '
Loss Unbearable, Loss Irrepearable.

'No! It's not your fault! ',
Said her sister,
Who lay dead in the vault,
Loss Unbearable, Loss Irrepearable.

Submitted: Saturday, June 07, 2008


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  • Mallory Simonton (2/15/2012 6:47:00 PM)

    I love that feeling in your spine when you read something absolutely amazing. Thanks for letting me feel that!

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  • Johnathan Pherigo (2/19/2009 12:32:00 AM)

    I love this poem! It comes straight from the heart

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  • Kristin F (12/29/2008 10:03:00 AM)

    i love this piece! it gives me goosebumps!

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  • Sarah Mustang (8/11/2008 5:21:00 AM)

    This poem sent shivers up my spine. A very interesting poem, quite touching.

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  • Janice Nevanen (6/25/2008 10:16:00 PM)

    This poem is quite compelling and intense. It's a well done and shows talent for expressing sorrow.

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