Let's See The Sun Descending! Poem by Shahzia Batool
Let's See The Sun Descending!
Come with me
on the edge of life!
Come let's do something new and think,
and unfurl the brave new world;
hand over ourselves to odd and clumsy thought-strain
then let's see what happens? and where? and how?
where does come the night-fall from?
let's go and see!
let's turn the side of the globe of the moon...
let's solve the mystery of the rainbow palette,
on skies and sands alike, , ,
that keeps us in all amazement!
where is the dale of deep sleep you know?
where dwell the slumbers sweet?
where do the dreams of joys come from?
let's go and touch those abstract dreams...
let's go and see the moonlit night
covering tall trees
let's go and see the skies in spring
let's go and see the sun descending
from the other side of the world!
come with me!
Jo kisi se nhi hota hay woh kr jaana hay! ! !
daring amazing and absolutely demonic in feral love.... Shakespearean old world charm...... what metaphor.....the lines seem to just rise up on their own.... dance in trance...alive throbbing vivacious. a celebration of love..... from cupid his choice arrow congrats dear poet. you have done a marvel here cheers :)
The natural setting presenting the vibrant state of mind, the clarion call for exploring the new horizon of love all cast a spell.Indeed a superb job!
This poem stands like an invitation letter that has no boundaries, but promising horizons of hopes, love and adventure.if people under different skies can be brought under one lovelit umbrella, it would be the solution for all wars arisen out of caste n religion.more properly saying: god created human, human made religions and finally humans along with religion started wars.
The mysteries of life are engrossing, also baffling! Men through ages have been in an eternal quest to unravel the riddles of life and existence! Let us join this train of explorers travelling to realms far! A very absorbing write!
Really great poem. some great lines, lets go and touch those abstract dreams Fantastic line.
ahh! u have made me remember the lines...... A poet could not but be gay In such a jocund company
Life is like this exactly. We never know where we will be in the next minute. Life is a dream. If you dream of beauty, harmony, kindness, you get it. Just dream on lovely places and you will find the way to get there.
where is the dale of deep sleep you know? where dwell the slumbers sweet? where do the dreams of joys come from? I like these lines...and have to find my answers..... An excellent poem! ! ! ! ! 10++++++++
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I would like to translate this poem
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''where is the dale of deep sleep you know? where dwell the slumbers sweet? '' ''dale of deep sleep '' ''dwell the slumbers sweet'' all these are excellent phrases, this is the curiosity of heart to know the unknown, by putting the question you enhanced the beauty of sleep and slumbers.....an excellent poem, i love it.