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Shahzia Batool

Rookie - 416 Points (Pakistan)

Jayakrishnan Aluva! ! !


Extra special diamond Soul
Plays a strong and silent role

Joys and pains of life conceives
Filth and fairness both perceives

His gem being gets always thrilled
At lovely scenes beauty-filled

His pictures capture sunset shades
Blows of breeze in valley-glades

Starry-gloss and moonlit shine
On cedars, willows, Oaks and pines

Fragrant, fruity, citron trees,
Buds, blossoms, birds and bees

Burning edge of turquoise sky
Singing floating birds on high

You glut your sorrows on his page
Set free of dolor, passions, rage

Good or bad he nothing hides
Shows with care both the sides

Havoc caused by summer-rains
Watered streets and blocked drains

Pics of thirst, hunger, wants
Terror scene that really haunts

All life stirring he observes
Feels the pain on noble nerves

Submitted: Tuesday, May 21, 2013
Edited: Tuesday, September 10, 2013

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A humble tribute to Jayakrishnan Aluva who offers his substantial contributions and services to human society on a social media channel through his non-verbal effective communication. His focused postings show the spirit of an idealist & a reformer.

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  • Rookie Passionate Reader (5/25/2013 7:00:00 AM)

    a great tribute! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! this is one of your qualities that you use beautiful rhyming pattern which adds to the beauty of your work! ! ! the tribute is brilliantly written thus presenting all the qualities of another great poet! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! loved it! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 781 Points Thomas A Robinson (5/24/2013 12:43:00 AM)

    The poem is outstanding and must be a reflection of a truly great poet. I must investigate more. As always thank you Shahzia. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 38 Points Indira Babbellapati (5/22/2013 12:12:00 PM)

    A flowing tribute to a gentle soul with absolute symmetry...always pleasure to read ur critique on prose or verse... :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie R.k Das (5/22/2013 2:15:00 AM)

    one of the best poetic tributes with rhyme and lots of reason :) thanx shahzia, , , , (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 516 Points Paul Brookes (5/22/2013 1:24:00 AM)

    All poets have there feelings close to the surface and feel too much. Great poem. Highly observational. You need to take the s's off conceives/perceives in the second stanza and 'His gem being gets always thrilled' should read His gem being got always thrilled in the third. I really enjoyed reading this poem 10/10 Thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 12,205 Points Valsa George (5/22/2013 12:20:00 AM)

    Hmmm..... What a befitting tribute! I have read two of his poems and he stands apart! His poems are just inimitable! !

    Shahzia, This poem of yours is marvellous! What wonderful flow.... How crisp and how sweet! ! I give you a 10 (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 6,164 Points Neela Nath (5/21/2013 11:27:00 PM)

    A wonderful tribute to Jaykrishnan Aluva.Your choice of words is always praiseworthy. Nothing to say more. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,944 Points Valerie Dohren (5/21/2013 4:43:00 PM)

    I do not know of this person, but your tribute is excellent and beautifully written Shahzia. So many lovely descriptive lines, a joy to read. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 145 Points Yasmeen Khan (5/21/2013 1:59:00 PM)

    A befitting tribute to a person who is compassionate and a reformer in neat rhythm and nice flow. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 2,123 Points Wahab Abdul (5/21/2013 10:33:00 AM)

    wow! what a tribute to a man, it must be fitting for him, and kudos to the poetess fr writing a gem, really, language, i mean here use of words and wind -gust like flow flourished, sweet and lovely..10/10 (Report) Reply

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