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Jayakrishnan Aluva! ! !

Extra special diamond Soul
Plays a strong and silent role

Joys and pains of life conceives
Filth and fairness both perceives

His gem being gets always thrilled
At lovely scenes beauty-filled

His pictures capture sunset shades
Blows of breeze in valley-glades

Starry-gloss and moonlit shine
On cedars, willows, Oaks and pines

Fragrant, fruity, citron trees,
Buds, blossoms, birds and bees

Burning edge of turquoise sky
Singing floating birds on high

You glut your sorrows on his page
Set free of dolor, passions, rage

Good or bad he nothing hides
Shows with care both the sides

Havoc caused by summer-rains
Watered streets and blocked drains

Pics of thirst, hunger, wants
Terror scene that really haunts

All life stirring he observes
Feels the pain on noble nerves

Submitted: Tuesday, May 21, 2013
Edited: Tuesday, September 10, 2013


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A humble tribute to Jayakrishnan Aluva who offers his substantial contributions and services to human society on a social media channel through his non-verbal effective communication. His focused postings show the spirit of an idealist & a reformer.

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  • Ramesh Rai (6/15/2013 8:27:00 AM)

    a great tribute. a good flow in writing

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  • Lasoaphia Quxazs (6/6/2013 10:20:00 AM)

    A perfect description of a wonderful friend. Every word is the truth and respect.

  • Passionate Reader (5/25/2013 7:00:00 AM)

    a great tribute! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! this is one of your qualities that you use beautiful rhyming pattern which adds to the beauty of your work! ! ! the tribute is brilliantly written thus presenting all the qualities of another great poet! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! loved it! ! !

  • Payal Parande (5/24/2013 2:54:00 AM)

    how humble ...and full of respect....a great tribute

  • Thomas A Robinson (5/24/2013 12:43:00 AM)

    The poem is outstanding and must be a reflection of a truly great poet. I must investigate more. As always thank you Shahzia.

  • Indira Babbellapati (5/22/2013 12:12:00 PM)

    A flowing tribute to a gentle soul with absolute symmetry...always pleasure to read ur critique on prose or verse... :)

  • Indira Babbellapati (5/22/2013 12:09:00 PM)

    A flowing tribute with absolute symmetry...always pleasure reading ur critique, in prose or verse :)

  • Chandra Thiagarajan (5/22/2013 10:32:00 AM)

    A great tribute to Jayakrishnan Aluva in wonderful rhyming couplets, Shahzia!

  • R.k Das (5/22/2013 2:15:00 AM)

    one of the best poetic tributes with rhyme and lots of reason :) thanx shahzia, , , ,

  • Paul Brookes (5/22/2013 1:24:00 AM)

    All poets have there feelings close to the surface and feel too much. Great poem. Highly observational. You need to take the s's off conceives/perceives in the second stanza and 'His gem being gets always thrilled' should read His gem being got always thrilled in the third. I really enjoyed reading this poem 10/10 Thanks for sharing

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