It's Really Great To See You Around! Poem by Shahzia Batool

It's Really Great To See You Around!

Rating: 3.4


When jolly birds fly in the air
and breeze plays with wanton hair
when dreams meet with eyes' glare
and every place has an air of fair

in my mind you can be found
my eyes want to see you around.

when eve approaches by and by
when stars intend to shine on the sky
when carefree aanchals freely enjoy
on wings of air i don't know why?

i feel myself severely bound
in this wish to see you around.

when the moon shines and looks kind
and sweeps away the worries from the mind
when it encounters the blows of wind
trees look smiling because they find

the beauteous weather all around
and then i want to see you around.

it may be fine or may be bad
whether birds sing or sit so sad
everyone feels grim or glad
whether fun of weather makes one mad

it's always great to see you around
it's really great to see you around

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vipins Puthooran 27 December 2011

'Tis really great to see you around/ a great poem.. Wow, , I like the word- structure! ! ! Really great and amazing! ! Top marks! !

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R.k Das 27 December 2011

wow.. one of teh loveliest emotions so beautifully and lyrically and musically poeticised, , thanx

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Muhammad Shanazar 28 December 2011

Elements of nature and romantic emotions have been blended in a splendid form, nucleus of all universe is only one thing that is the sentiment of love which the poetess wants to realize, else her whole life and entire structure of the universe is ineffective. The stars, the moon and the breeze etc. are meaningful if the hearts brim with the most precious item: Love. Lucid language with sooth cadence. Muhammad Shanazar

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Saadat Tahir 01 January 2012

@ Arkay ..........loveliest emotions so beautifully and lyrically and musically.. i so agree... written very well indeed :)

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Soulful Heart 28 January 2012

beautiful shazia to have u around.............so musical

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M Asim Nehal 15 November 2015

A poem with true feel...Lovely write Shazia...Liked it.10+++

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Sun Shine 22 November 2012

wonderful and lovely feelings are expressed in whether birds sing or sit so sad :)

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Captain Cur 08 June 2012

Friends make the good times so much better, and help us through the sad times. Very original poem, I liked the refrain which reinforces the thought over and over.

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Indira Babbellapati 25 April 2012

i hear loads of melody as i read it to myself...and the crescendo is the refrain by way of closing lines...

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Kee Thampi 19 February 2012

a poem must be filled with fly of soul to words When jolly birds fly in the air and breeze plays with wanton hair when dreams meet with eyes' glare and every place has an air of fair

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