Aftab Alam

Gold Star - 39,733 Points (15 th April 1967 / , , RANCHI,)

Illusion - Poem by Aftab Alam

All have seen me walked on the rose bed
Where as I walked on prickly thorn
My thought, ye born within unborn
Illusion! I warn you, vanish before red


Comments about Illusion by Aftab Alam

  • Rookie Shah Jehan Ashrafi (9/6/2013 8:04:00 PM)

    short but sweet poem (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 20 Points Kay Tee (9/5/2013 6:59:00 PM)

    nice poem, check out mine and see what you think. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,229 Points Geetha Jayakumar (9/4/2013 10:16:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem...life is full of illusion, not sure where we are walking into. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,072 Points Heather Wilkins (9/1/2013 6:30:00 PM)

    those rose beds are full of thorns. walk softly (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, September 1, 2013

Poem Edited: Tuesday, September 3, 2013


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