I Made Her Laugh................[short; Humor; Community] Poem by Bri Edwards

I Made Her Laugh................[short; Humor; Community]



As I walked this afternoon downtown (I didn't drive but took my feet) ,
I passed a popular shop where you can obtain a yummy ice cream treat.
And once you've got it......., (in a chair in front of the shop) , you may take a seat.

In a short distance I came abreast of a couple eating from cones their sweet,
and I said "Excuse me, don't you know the law against ice cream eating on the street? "
[a brief pause and then……..]
The man chuckled; the woman followed with a laugh.

MY day was now complete.

(Nov.2012)

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
the story is true though i said something like 'don't you know....on the sidewalk (not 'street') '. and as far as i KNOW there is no such law. i was just trying to be funny and it worked.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nayanika Dey 03 May 2017

The poem is short and full of humor. Loved reading it!

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Darlene Walsh 14 August 2015

An ice cream and a laugh, what more could you want. A very cute little poem.

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Kaila George 02 December 2012

Your a funny man...this is very good.

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