jonathan Juarez

Rookie - 70 Points (Orange CA.)

hoopla


trying to do something new
dying to love something blue
living to see whats inside
limitless youth abandons truth
finding out the capitulate theory
where it is dark and dreary
testing the sleuth nausea booth
i got a head ache what's said nurse
looking for a body high that's it
feeling like shit getting used to it
need to be shit out of luck
awe struck the duck plucks
feathers of weathers attacking the sever
iv'e been told gold is old
i about to withhold
what's said and done for fun
to be dumb and bored glum
sacred all star left the bar
bleeding scar i can't see anything
i wish i could tree see
a bee sting horrible scene
colors collide worlds hide
i don't under stand here
where is it scarce the source fair
confused under the wings grabbing hold
another hour of sour power
trying not to catch a cold typing fast
she told me meet again see you later
pounding the sun falling from bets
live tv is nothing but stares
stars in my case must of made up their blinds
make your bed and unmake your head
how long does this shit last
as much as the past
i can't think straight wearing sweat pants
my computer battery broke
what; s the devils way now
are you such a dreamer
the ferris wheel is stuck again
and i don't look my age
quick with a comeback
the father figures its way too late
i make sense don't i
waited so long for this to come true
about thirty one years older
my music should be bolder
i got heartburn medication
i'm feeling better now thanks for asking
i love that
i'm as stupid as this looks
i don't read too many books
my head hurts its a bad headache
fake even brought me here
places on the ceiling
can't you tell me anything
we are here aren't we
neon threads accurate copies
pee on your feet if your a athlete
king of the streets meet and great
attempting to lose eyes
how long does this take to kick in
do i ever repeat myself forever
but now the lights are off
home is where the start is
are you going to be brave or behave
wrong songs long prongs

Submitted: Thursday, February 20, 2014
Edited: Friday, February 21, 2014

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  • Rookie - 150 Points Patti Masterman (2/26/2014 8:32:00 PM)

    A lot going on in this. Felt like a whirlwind tour inside another's head! Interesting and lots of room for augury of the soul. (Report) Reply

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