Aftab Alam

Gold Star - 39,733 Points (15 th April 1967 / , , RANCHI,)

Grief V - Poem by Aftab Alam

Potters used the wheel
And made the lovely pot
The greatest invention of past
Still we are wheeling
Round the humanity
In a circular path
There is no last


Comments about Grief V by Aftab Alam

  • Gold Star - 8,357 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (6/24/2013 10:09:00 AM)

    Life goes round and round. Hope it is not all grief. Thank you. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 363 Points David Wood (6/24/2013 6:56:00 AM)

    A very profound poem. We are all but clay pots moulded by the supreme potter. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 36,896 Points Gajanan Mishra (6/24/2013 5:02:00 AM)

    greatest invention of time, thanks. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,072 Points Heather Wilkins (6/23/2013 2:47:00 PM)

    humanity is moving in a circular but should take a look at the past and not repeat mistake, excellent (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,205 Points Sallam Yassin (6/23/2013 1:56:00 PM)

    the aim is- no to make
    the mistakes of past
    but still we are doing the same
    well done bro
    be blessed (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,325 Points S.zaynub Kamoonpuri (6/23/2013 12:31:00 PM)

    A great philosophical poem in brevity.! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,824 Points Wahab Abdul (6/23/2013 10:07:00 AM)

    fantastic, this short poem has wider significance.. humanity is moving in a circular path.... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, June 23, 2013

Poem Edited: Friday, July 26, 2013


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