Aftab Alam

(15 th April 1967 / , , RANCHI,)

Grief IV


There is oceanic race
All are ready to face
As they took part on it

All knew
Friendship is the ship
With a hole in it ….

Submitted: Sunday, June 23, 2013
Edited: Friday, July 26, 2013

Do you like this poem?
0 person liked.
0 person did not like.

What do you think this poem is about?



Read this poem in other languages

This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.

I would like to translate this poem »

word flags

What do you think this poem is about?

Comments about this poem (Grief IV by Aftab Alam )

Enter the verification code :

  • Rookie - 705 Points Sallam Yassin (6/23/2013 1:50:00 PM)

    in that race
    what makes the different
    is our relation to the hole in our ship
    some make it large and some
    cover your back
    and that make us all succeeded in that race well done (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 751 Points Wahab Abdul (6/23/2013 10:09:00 AM)

    ha ha ha friendship is like a ship.... strong tide of race makes a hole on it... wonderful thought...this is new kind of poetry of yours... enjoyed (Report) Reply

Read all 5 comments »

New Poems

  1. Doing Time, Betsy Sholl
  2. ordeal, dr.k.g.balakrishnan kandangath
  3. Innovative way, hasmukh amathalal
  4. Haiku- Connotation, DEEPAK KUMAR PATTANAYAK
  5. Silent Witness, James coupland
  6. A happy Farmer Family, Nishchal Ningleku
  7. Yes and no two words, gajanan mishra
  8. sister forever, yolandey breedt
  9. Diya (Reposted), DEEPAK KUMAR PATTANAYAK
  10. Life is better shared, belinda mrwebi

Poem of the Day

poet William Butler Yeats

WINE comes in at the mouth
And love comes in at the eye;
That's all we shall know for truth
Before we grow old and die.
I lift the glass to my mouth,
...... Read complete »

 

Modern Poem

poet Anna Akhmatova

 

Member Poem

poet Sumita Datta

Trending Poems

  1. A Drinking Song, William Butler Yeats
  2. Still I Rise, Maya Angelou
  3. The Road Not Taken, Robert Frost
  4. Daffodils, William Wordsworth
  5. Invictus, William Ernest Henley
  6. 1914 V: The Soldier, Rupert Brooke
  7. Phenomenal Woman, Maya Angelou
  8. Everything, Anna Akhmatova
  9. Death is Nothing at All, Henry Scott Holland
  10. I Know Why The Caged Bird Sings, Maya Angelou

Trending Poets

[Hata Bildir]