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Aftab Alam

Gold Star - 33,871 Points (15 th April 1967 / , , RANCHI,)

Grief IV


There is oceanic race
All are ready to face
As they took part on it

All knew
Friendship is the ship
With a hole in it ….

Submitted: Sunday, June 23, 2013
Edited: Friday, July 26, 2013

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  • Freshman - 1,585 Points Sallam Yassin (6/23/2013 1:50:00 PM)

    in that race
    what makes the different
    is our relation to the hole in our ship
    some make it large and some
    cover your back
    and that make us all succeeded in that race well done (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 2,123 Points Wahab Abdul (6/23/2013 10:09:00 AM)

    ha ha ha friendship is like a ship.... strong tide of race makes a hole on it... wonderful thought...this is new kind of poetry of yours... enjoyed (Report) Reply

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