Aftab Alam

Gold Star - 39,733 Points (15 th April 1967 / , , RANCHI,)

Grief Iv - Poem by Aftab Alam

There is oceanic race
All are ready to face
As they took part on it

All knew
Friendship is the ship
With a hole in it ….


Comments about Grief Iv by Aftab Alam

  • Rookie - 347 Points David Wood (6/24/2013 7:14:00 AM)

    A very profound piem about friebdships (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 33,957 Points Gajanan Mishra (6/24/2013 5:03:00 AM)

    friendship is a ship with a hole, wonderful. selfishness is there. thanks. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,835 Points Heather Wilkins (6/23/2013 2:45:00 PM)

    nice take on friendship. it is how we approach it (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,953 Points Sallam Yassin (6/23/2013 1:50:00 PM)

    in that race
    what makes the different
    is our relation to the hole in our ship
    some make it large and some
    cover your back
    and that make us all succeeded in that race well done (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,742 Points Wahab Abdul (6/23/2013 10:09:00 AM)

    ha ha ha friendship is like a ship.... strong tide of race makes a hole on it... wonderful thought...this is new kind of poetry of yours... enjoyed (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, June 23, 2013

Poem Edited: Friday, July 26, 2013


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