Greed Poem by SALINI NAIR

Greed

Rating: 4.8


End of life was in tune
Melody that swings somewhere
Strange mind swish a hope
I need a shoulder to cry on

Long years of solitude
Awed ways that marched lonely
Plead for love in empty corners
Thrash that hooked in vagueness of life

Find love in a deserted corner
Hug it with the disastrous wings
As death admired as its part
Greed of love that sinks itself

Death is a mentor of life and love
Span that wait to seize its spark
Moves to its mouth with empty hands
Contracted love that lilt always

Plea for love is the greatest deed
String that lies in bottom of heart
Sometimes unknown or ignore
But hurts as its greed……

©2014 SALINI.S.NAIR. All rights reserved.

Saturday, November 8, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: greed
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
An orphan always plea for love...even at the moment of death….
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gangadharan Nair Pulingat 08 November 2014

Greed of love that sinks itself......wonderful writing and feeling. Likes it.

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Gangadharan Nair Pulingat 08 November 2014

A great writing and sad full feeling it makes.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 08 November 2014

Death is a mentor of life and love...but greed lasts with man for living and enjoying. Very beautiful description and nice explanation of greed in this poem. Truly said greed hurts others.

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Akhtar Jawad 08 November 2014

Greed of love has no limits and sometime ends in tearful frustration when don't even get a shoulder to cry. |...10

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Gajanan Mishra 08 November 2014

life and love, very fine, I like it.

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Ramesh Rai 13 November 2014

Plea for love is the greatest deed String that lies in bottom of heart Sometimes unknown or ignore But hurts as its greed…… yes! I am greedy of love.

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Valsa George 12 November 2014

Each human heart craves for love.... For an orphan who has rarely tasted love in his life will definitely be longing for love till his last moment! It is a greed that cannot be easily satisfied! Great write!

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 09 November 2014

Plea for love is the greatest deed String that lies in bottom of heart Sometimes unknown or ignore But hurts as its greed……ell penned

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 08 November 2014

A phenomenal write on greed so beautifully worded....salini.....you deserve 10/10

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Kee Thampi 08 November 2014

Al poetess are cursed to..... Melody that swings somewhere Strange mind swish a hope I need a shoulder to cry on Long years of solitude This poetess touches our heart with her words to soul

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