Grievance Box Poem by SALINI NAIR

Grievance Box



It was raining all the way
Spring of life was its charm
Rejuvenation was its pool
Though flood was it's bewail
They wet in its ram and curse
Then he fold world with warm

Summer was his warmth
There the dryness was in hue
There fade the face of nature
Thirst augmented in loon
World shrink and crack in hotness
There the fall was all the way

Worlds form turns to fall
Harvest was its charm
Bed the nature with its sheet
Rejoice was there for some time
Greenery was out of way
So all plead for its change

Darkness groom for long time
Chilliness profound there for long
Snowfall was heavy some side
Breeze chill the mind for some time
All curse the calmness of winter
Then he spread his warmth evolved

Then they fed up in that mood
Plea to change it for awhile
It's the thirst of human mind
Fulfillment a far dream
Plea that revolves round his thoughts
Change that push him to change! ! ! !

©2014 SALINI.S.NAIR. All rights reserved.

Monday, August 18, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aftab Alam Khursheed 23 August 2014

Every one keeps the said box, It is haunting like a ghost in mind, poetess SALINI imagination is the reality and nicely she put in the poetry form...love this poem brilliant write

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Geetha Jayakumar 20 August 2014

Beautiful poem Salini. I really feel we should have Grievance box in which we can put all our unfulfilled desire. In this case one box wont be enough, and we will be standing in a queue to put our grievances. Very true said, in few lines..... It's the thirst of human mind Fulfillment a far dream Plea that revolves round his thoughts Change that push him to change! ! ! ! One fact is true our desires are never going to be fulfilled any time. If any time anything gets fulfilled unexpectedly one should never forget to tell our dreams got fulfilled...... I loved the way you presented this topic.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 18 August 2014

Man proposes and God disposes.......since birth to the last breath we have only grievances and the favours that have been blessed are hardly remembered and hence we don't see our desires fulfilled at all.......... very well composed

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Salini Nair 18 August 2014

fulfillment is a far dream for human being....each time some desire controls his thoughts! ! !

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