Mother ……….. Poem by SALINI NAIR

Mother ………..

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First feel not in reminiscence
But can feel aloud
It was there to hold all
Mother the phenomenon
Wrap that never bust
Wrestle to protect
But bang to restrict
Yet never revolt for freedom
March for all; but never asked to pay
Contract the wish yet conquer the world
Enormous form in the world
Mother the feel, the proud behind
First love that never ravage
Eternal vision that send to world
Landed before to carry the guest
Fold with love and care
Say good bye after the mission
Eternal phenomenon that continues…………

©2014 SALINI.S.NAIR. All rights reserved.

Monday, April 7, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: mother
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gajanan Mishra 07 April 2014

fold with love and care, I like it, thanks.

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A heart that is always warm To son or daughter at any age A mother once, a mother forever Her love and compassion never fades............... Very good poem. I also welcome you to my page

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Yash Shinde 10 April 2014

.filled with affection and love for a woman who brings you into this world in nurtures you, throughout her life......... She cannot be thanked by a rhyme of few words, yet this beautiful tribute of yours, will bring tears of joy to her eyes.........

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Salini Nair 13 April 2014

mother the truth....her visual..............

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In this world of sorrow and other difficulties it is the mother who always comes to our rescue through her love and affection without selfishness and there is no comparison to that divine word as mother. The poet have written a good poem with highly thoughtful words and it became a wonderful creation and poem. I interested the poem.

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Nice thought on mother.I love it

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Dr Dillip K Swain 17 October 2017

A great poem..! I loved it.. thanks for sharing

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Unnikrishnan E S 03 September 2016

Hi Salini, A totally different take on the phenomenon of motherhood. First feel not in reminiscence But can feel aloud It was there to hold all Mother the phenomenon Mother is the Wrap never bust Who Wrestles to protect But bang to restrict, but the child never revolts for freedom And she never asks to pay' back for all the love and care she has rendered to her child. Yes, Mother is the feel that makes everyone proud and his/her First love. She does does not stay back to say good bye after the mission, but wishes to simply fade away. An Eternal phenomenon that continues………… Beautifully penned. Manifest of all the love and care enjoyed by the poet from her mother and may be, all the affection she has for her mother. Loved reading.

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Dr Antony Theodore 23 September 2015

Mother, the eternal phenomenon that continues... a very fine ending for such a beautiful poem. love of the mother, and love for the mother. very nice poem thank you

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Sranisha Francis 20 September 2015

These words are very beautiful. First love that never ravage Eternal vision that send to world

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