Rule Of Nature Poem by SALINI NAIR

Rule Of Nature

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Glimpse the colors of solitude
Flag of ruin whispers there
Tremor that expect for a stampede
Sound that resound in solitude

Fumes are lively and delimited
Flow that explodes in a system
From the depths of a broken heart
Destruction not benevolent at all

Burn that swallow peacefulness
Ash never speak its pain inside
Ruined part of fertile land
Perished in the anger that lord

Never impede it with lazy skill
Let it calm for a renaissance
Open eyes to a fertile land
Rejuvenated with new norms

Anger burns but revamp something
Smashed stillness that prolific inside
To renew the love in another form
A breeze that is abundant someway! ! ! !

©2014 SALINI.S.NAIR. All rights reserved

Thursday, December 4, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: nature
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
a poem on volcano eruption
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akhtar Jawad 04 December 2014

Anger burns but revamp something Smashed stillness that prolific inside To renew the love in another form A breeze that is abundant someway! ! ! ! Yes it is so. When temperature increases too much clouds rise and cause rains. The weather is changed. The lovers when reunite it's a lovely and beautiful relationship. A beautiful poem.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 05 December 2014

Glimpse the colors of solitude Flag of ruin whispers there Tremor that expect for a stampede Sound that resound in solitude love the stanza very nice thank you

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 05 December 2014

Glimpse the colors of solitude Flag of ruin whispers there Tremor that expect for a stampede Sound that resound in solitude love the stanza very nice thank you

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Edward Kofi Louis 05 December 2014

Nice piece of work. Thanks for sharing this poem with us. E.K.L.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 05 December 2014

Nice poem crafted brilliantly on one of the aspects of Nature........amazing write

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Dr Antony Theodore 23 August 2015

Anger burns but revamp something Smashed stillness that prolific inside To renew the love in another form A breeze that is abundant someway! liked these lines sooo much. very very fine. nice poem crafted brilliantly.

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Akhtar Jawad 12 March 2015

When someone bursts out in anger he becomes peaceful in that moment and that is the best time to attack him with the weapons of love, he will surrender unconditionally. A nice poem.

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Valsa George 11 December 2014

Though silent, lava churns inside a volcano which might explode at any time! An angry man is like a volcano! When he learns to conquer his anger, the fire within him dies out and he will cease to be dangerous! Great write!

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Heather Wilkins 10 December 2014

a beautifully written poem nice work Salini

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Bhargabi Dei Mahakul 07 December 2014

Wonderful glimpse makes this poem more natural and great tribute to Mother Nature. All should never show anger and should leave giving pain. Beautiful message within.

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