Once Poem by SALINI NAIR

Once

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Serenity ruled its base form
Abundance lured his common rays
Mighty hands that warmth its part
Wish to merge in thy art
Explore to be near his shadow
To order the prolific rays of nature

Stare to form from a single sect
To be a chord of his concert
Supreme past of a life's march
Voyage that lift to extreme summit
United to be a gang of shadows
To Rule the brightness of eternity

Forget the past as an opportunist
Started to control the supreme wisdom
Swathed the warmth as a winner
Lost the self in senseless conflict
Fall to the lower part of world
Without conscience in senses

Life is a track of plotted tact
Silent voyage specific always
Superiority never excel in its way
Grace it with hands of goodness
Never guard him with those terror hands
As he guards all unit with wisdom! ! !

©2015 SALINI.S.NAIR. All rights reserved.

Tuesday, January 20, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: terrorism
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Clouds try to cover sun...but never happen completely. God has the power to protect himself..Hope he never expect support from human being… so please stop terrorism
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aftab Alam Khursheed 20 January 2015

One and the only one Master to control very nice _Forget the past as an opportunist Started to control the supreme wisdom thank you very much

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Rajesh Thankappan 21 January 2015

Never guard him with those terror hands As he guards all unit with wisdom! ! ! Taking recourse to terrorism on the pretext of guarding ones religion is the height of hypocrisy. As you have very rightly pointed out, God has the wherewithal and the power to care of Himself. Excellent write.

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Rajesh Thankappan 21 January 2015

Never guard him with those terror hands As he guards all unit with wisdom! ! ! Taking recourse to terrorism on the pretext of guarding ones religion is the height of hypocrisy. As you have very rightly pointed out, God has the wherewithal and the power to care of Himself. Excellent write.

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Akhtar Jawad 22 January 2015

Life is a track of plotted tact Silent voyage specific always Superiority never excel in its way Grace it with hands of goodness Never guard him with those terror hands As he guards all unit with wisdom! ! ! Great thoughts nicely presented..........10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 February 2015

Forget the past as an opportunist Started to control the supreme wisdom Swathed the warmth as a winner Lost the self in senseless conflict Fall to the lower part of world Without conscience in senses..........deep feeling with clear picture. Attractive composition. High standard word choice. Many thanks madam.

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Khalid Saifullah 16 February 2015

Great message..................................

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Khalid Saifullah 16 February 2015

Great message..................................

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Edward Kofi Louis 15 February 2015

Life is a track of plotted tact. Nice piece of work. Thanks for sharing thisd poem with us. E.K.L.

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Kee Thampi 25 January 2015

lure themes makes rhymes Silent voyage specific always

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