adheez van der beanthz

Rookie - 43 Points (27 May 1980)

Forgive Me...


I'm not a perfect man
nor a rich who have a treasure abound

I'm just a man with a handfuls of feelings..
that flared up like ocean waves
flew up like Katarina's hurricanes
and blew up like Tambora's eruptions

I'm not going to promise about morning beauty
moreover swear, if life always be happy

I'm just able to give..
a heart forms whose accompany, although the whole world not agree
a piece of soul whose believe, though millions eyes staring suspiciously
and a stack of body whose faithful to take care, despite tired weaken a life

This is me who present to you..
This is love that I'm offering you..

if you are doubt, please don't assume it taboo
if you can't accept, please don't assume it ignoble

forgive me, if I finally fall
fall in love with you


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Submitted: Wednesday, January 09, 2013
Edited: Saturday, August 03, 2013

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Comments about this poem (Forgive Me... by adheez van der beanthz )

  • Rookie - 25 Points Mohammed Al-balushi (3/25/2014 4:49:00 AM)

    so romantic full of true feelings, yes that all what we can give, lovely dear (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Katerina Richmond (11/12/2013 3:11:00 PM)

    Oh my gosh..... This is wonderful! Forgive me, i finally fall, fall in love with you.... I'm sure you have someone close to your heart. Write on! (it's a pun. I couldn't help it. Sorry.) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 53 Points Cassandra Jasmine (9/24/2013 9:19:00 PM)

    I especially enjoyed reading this poem. But you're human! Don't expect yourself to be stone-hearted.
    Great poem. Kudos (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 7,536 Points Geetha Jayakumar (8/12/2013 12:43:00 PM)

    Beautiful poem..this is love I'm offering you..beautiful write. Loved reading it. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 9,695 Points Heather Wilkins (8/5/2013 1:55:00 PM)

    nice very nicely written. your love speaks wonders. enjoyed the write (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 4,834 Points Savita Tyagi (1/12/2013 11:53:00 AM)

    An offering of a great poem is well received and cherished. Thanks for sharing. Loved it. (Report) Reply

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