adheez van der beanthz

Rookie - 42 Points (27 May 1980)

How Could I.. - Poem by adheez van der beanthz

how could I deny the morning
when your eyes looked so pristine
pierced deep into the heart
calmed the entire emotions

how could I deny the dusk
if your smile is a cloud portrait
strands of the charming strophe
that I read in the library of love

how could I deny the night
whilst the moon is the hopes
the light that you entrusted
till I don't get lost

how could I deny the rain
while the sun come for toast
to the frozen-doubt bodies
are refract the longing into you

yeah you..
whose stop my world


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Comments about How Could I.. by adheez van der beanthz

  • Veteran Poet - 1,349 Points Unwritten Soul (1/6/2014 10:03:00 AM)

    You wrote it freely from your mind...like let it go and release all from all things inside, how could i..how could i be cruel to say its is not good because it was a nice work from you adheez_Soul (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 33 Points Mark Dillon (2/19/2013 5:10:00 AM)

    Really enjoyed this, sweet, concise, meaningful. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,716 Points Sally Plumb Plumb (2/14/2013 3:15:00 AM)

    Lovely piece. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 126 Points Kelvin Owusu (2/11/2013 3:45:00 AM)

    Beautiful piece of poetry a lovely read (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 44 Points Malaya Roses (2/7/2013 5:09:00 PM)

    Lovely thoughts made this poem so beautiful and always fresh for re-reading. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,498 Points Savita Tyagi (2/6/2013 9:08:00 AM)

    A very sweet relationship created with nature and love. Both beauties mesmerize with equal intensity. Lovely poem. thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, February 5, 2013

Poem Edited: Sunday, June 16, 2013


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