adheez van der beanthz

Rookie - 43 Points (27 May 1980)

Debt


yesterday..
i has been pawn this heart
to a pieces of desire
and the face of freedom

today..
i sell the rest of life
to the pity prayer hope
for the justice that persecuted

tomorrow..
this soul will be confiscated
hung in the name of sins
from debt that never existed

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Submitted: Monday, December 17, 2012
Edited: Sunday, June 16, 2013

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Comments about this poem (Debt by adheez van der beanthz )

  • Rookie - 112 Points Maria C. Pires Costa (8/16/2013 5:54:00 PM)

    May fairness, hope and freedom surround your days along with serenity!
    Thanks for sharing it! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 7,536 Points Geetha Jayakumar (8/15/2013 1:30:00 AM)

    Wow. So beautifully expressed...loved reading it. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 9,695 Points Heather Wilkins (8/13/2013 11:13:00 AM)

    excellent poem we all pawn our heart at one time or the other. Is this a smart move? well we each learn from it (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Owain Glyn (6/12/2013 4:34:00 AM)

    I really love the clever structure of this piece. I guess all our hearts have been pawned at some point in our lives, sometimes they are never redeemed. (Report) Reply

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