Aya Nasr

Rookie - 11 Points (17/9/1993 / cairo, Egypt)

Flew Away (Happy May P2) * - Poem by Aya Nasr

Spring of May...
You became so far away
Everything around me became grey
You're not only spring of May
You're spring of everyday

You haunt my inner diary
Your picture doesn't leave
I think you stole my heart
What a harsh sticky thief!

I'm trying to stop thinking of thee
You flew away but still occupying me
I'm crying begging to set my love free
Let it fly let it beat, its my wish so mote it be!


Comments about Flew Away (Happy May P2) * by Aya Nasr

  • Veteran Poet - 1,353 Points Unwritten Soul (9/18/2013 5:34:00 AM)

    No doubt a great poem here...loved it_Soul (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Chris Hickman (9/2/2013 6:37:00 AM)

    Well Written. Good Job! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 34 Points Vivian Nguyen (8/26/2013 12:35:00 PM)

    This poem should have a better beat and grammar... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 22 Points Eslam Fawzy (8/24/2013 3:23:00 PM)

    i loved it :) keep it up (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 4,903 Points Patricia Grantham (8/24/2013 12:45:00 PM)

    Love in the springtime is ever so beautiful. It blooms like
    the flowers. Sooner or later the love that flourish will fade
    away like the fresh flowers. Hopefully the seeds of love will
    remain. Nice write. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 150 Points Abdallah Gamal (8/24/2013 4:44:00 AM)

    Wo0o0o0o0o0w, a well-written poem, keep up the good work :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 15 Points Benjamin Wiche (8/24/2013 1:30:00 AM)

    nice piece...

    You haunt my inner diary
    Your picture doesn't leave
    I think you stole my heart
    What a harsh sticky thief! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,421 Points Khairul Ahsan (8/23/2013 6:56:00 PM)

    A beautiful poem on spring. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 21,269 Points Mohammad Skati (8/23/2013 6:19:00 PM)

    I read your pretty poem. You have great imagination that helps you too much. I loved your poem. Keep writing more. Thanks. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 249 Points Vipins Puthooran (8/23/2013 4:03:00 PM)

    Well-structured poem! ! ! ! I like it! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, August 23, 2013

Poem Edited: Monday, August 26, 2013


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