Aya Nasr

Rookie - 11 Points (17/9/1993 / cairo, Egypt)

Fake - Poem by Aya Nasr

Walking in the street alone
And The weather is so cold
Having words haven't been told

My body like cube of ice
Remembering how much you were nice
Thought that you'll make my life into paradise
But I found that I'm not that wise..
When I told My drama story of your deception to my friends their reaction was 'oh my allah! ' And 'jesus christ'...

My shock needs a break..
To be convinced that ma repose to you was a mistake...
And everything you said before was all FAKE...


Poet's Notes about The Poem

its about nasty man played with my feelings and left me
'bad men are like the stinky flies they leave flowers and stick themselves in shitty garbage'

Comments about Fake by Aya Nasr

  • Gold Star - 4,903 Points Patricia Grantham (8/24/2013 3:35:00 PM)

    Some people are real and some are fake. After a while
    after you have known them you get to tell the difference.
    If they are fake your reputation is at stake. If they are real
    you know how it feel. All the best. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 210 Points Mohammad Muzzammil (1/13/2013 12:08:00 AM)

    In your poem, you have poured down your heart that has taken the form of a beautiful poem. Your poem needs only slight polish, rest everything is okay. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, January 10, 2013

Poem Edited: Friday, January 11, 2013


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