Farewell To The Day Poem by Anil Kumar Panda

Farewell To The Day

Rating: 5.0

The blue tailed bird
Picks up its last worm
As in the falling light of the evening
The boughs begin to shed long shadows

The trees bow before
The setting sun as dew drops
Begin to fall on green grasses and
Silence reigns across plains and meadows

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 17 January 2024

A wonderful poem with full of action packed imagery... appreciated

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Anjandev Roy 17 January 2024

Magnificent piece....thanks for sharing...

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 17 January 2024

Excellent piece Anil TFS Bravo! ! ! !

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Bri Edwards 17 January 2024

Anil, Do I count FOUR alliterations in these lines? ? ? These: 'The trees bow before The setting sun as dew drops Begin to fall on green grasses and' Yes! 4 of them. : ) But....

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Indira Renganathan 20 January 2024

A picturesque poem on the day's fall....lovely write

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Sylvia Frances Chan 17 January 2024

Loveliest worded in this farewell to the day poem, amazingly presented, beautiful poem.TFS

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Kim Barney 17 January 2024

Great images; great poem!

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Bri Edwards 17 January 2024

I give Anil's poem ***** five stars BECAUSE he left comment(s) on one of mine, & his is well-written, and I like the Nature nature of the poem. : ) bri

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Bri Edwards 17 January 2024

(cont.) .....I THINK 'dew drops' do NOT 'fall' on plants, but, instead form when moisture(water) in the surrounding air condenses on the plant surfaces. ;)

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