kanav justa

Freshman - 1,059 Points (Shimla)

D For Dog


the way oh dear you wiggle your tail
the way you comely sit
i like the way you wet the poles
i like the way you shit

and your charming tongue that’s always out
and ears that point the sky
when I see you next to me
every woe, they just all die

i love the way you dig a hole
i love the way you fall
i love you when you walk like us
i love you when you crawl

i trust you like a rising sun
i love you like a star
i know all words have failed to tell
what a lovely being you are

Submitted: Monday, February 10, 2014
Edited: Tuesday, February 11, 2014

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  • Veteran Poet - 4,807 Points Bri Edwards (10/29/2014 11:30:00 PM)

    when I see you next to me
    every woe, they just all die .............nice.

    and this:

    i know all words have failed to tell
    what a lovely being you are .....................superb! are we sure i didn't write this? ?
    - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -

    C For Cat

    Curiously curled at my feet,
    my little cat is so, so sweet.
    Not only that; there is her fur,
    and the way my cat does purr.

    Also the way she licks herself is neat;
    her flank, her butt, and her four feet.
    Well, if Kanav can use....the word shit,
    i guess i'll use butt. Don't have a fit!

    thanks for sharing. i'll send this little gem (kanav's that is) to MyPoemList. (i get points that way, don't i? ? !)

    bri :) (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,094 Points * Sunprincess * (10/10/2014 7:50:00 PM)

    .........kanav I loved reading this one...it's so nicely written and very heart warming....yes it's a real pleasure to read.....and yes it is true, you do write the best and most beautiful dedications....if I was a dog, I would be your most loyal friend :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 625 Points V P Mahur (3/29/2014 3:23:00 AM)

    Dear Kanav,
    Very cute and lovely poem this one. Liked reading it.
    Thanks
    Please reply (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 15,305 Points Valsa George (3/27/2014 10:32:00 AM)

    Interesting observations about your dog.... Of all, it is so nice to watch a dog digging a hole! Though simple, this is a sweet poem Kanav! Thanks for your comment on my poem Eagle on Wings! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 9,794 Points Sandra Feldman (3/23/2014 4:05:00 AM)

    I cannot really stat to tell,
    What a lovely poem this is
    I have a darling doggie too,
    That makes me feel, just like you do.

    Thanks for wrting my feelings for me, I just loved this poem, what a beautiful homage to your doggie!
    True Love.
    10 Bow Wows for you! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,553 Points Dinesh Nair (2/26/2014 6:37:00 AM)

    Perhaps he wakes early up with man.
    He goes to sleep late like the latter
    And lives a life without any love for his fellow beings...

    But we like this dog all, Kanav. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,626 Points Ken E Hall (2/25/2014 3:52:00 AM)

    Tongue in cheek humour explains your love for a doggie, how man would be if his faithful mind was the same as the dog...great fun read...regards (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 3,609 Points Hazel Durham (2/23/2014 3:25:00 PM)

    I love dogs too, they are such a joy and comfort, great rhyming Kanav and a wonderful poem! (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 5,309 Points Lyn Paul (2/21/2014 5:17:00 PM)

    Lovely words Kanav we now have seen a different side of you. You are a great dog owner as well as a creative poet. A dog can put a smile on any ones face. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 2,810 Points Rajesh Thankappan (2/19/2014 10:30:00 AM)

    The last two lines of the poem tells us much more about the man's best friend, the dog, than what anyone can describe. Dogs are know to have rescued people from drowning, fire, etc. etc. A beautiful write. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 417 Points Kavya . (2/19/2014 1:09:00 AM)

    yes dogs are wonderful living beings.........grateful pets........much wiser than humans..........loved this unique poem (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 2,772 Points Valerie Dohren (2/15/2014 11:01:00 AM)

    A man's best friend, and they give unconditional love - great tribute to our canine friends. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,094 Points * Sunprincess * (2/11/2014 6:34:00 PM)

    ........oh kanav, I LOVE this poem, it is so beautiful and special to me.....it is truly another awesome write from your magical pen....i absolutely LOVE this beautiful tribute to all of the special dogs.... which they say are man's BEST FRIEND....I especially LOVE the sled dogs of Alaska....a lot of people count on them for everything from transportation to bringing supplies.... I also LOVE the dogs which rescue people, lost in a snow avalanche....and I LOVE the police dogs which chase the bad guys....and yes of course, I LOVE the little dogs, which do nothing but show us LOVE and AFFECTION....and you know I LOVE THIS POEM....it is so wonderful just like you...XOXOX (Report) Reply

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