Constant Sorrow Poem by kanav justa

the ending was so amazing.....keep on poeting... »so close«

I have just got to tell you, there are very few pieces that I read that have made me laugh out loud, yours most certainly did! Not really fair to take it out on the poor flies! ha, ha, ha. I shall definitely read some more. Worth a 10

You kept me guessing what the end will be like. there you go my dear. the last line is an extremely unexpected end. Very nice and very imaginative. You know your last line is very powerful. yes it's comic but means a lot and makes the readers thinking. What distress! if someone finds killing flies better than. 10 out of 10 dear

SO short but it conclude all perfectly....that's how a good poem can share! Nice nice nice write Kanav...it really good, very good..and so true heartfelt_Soul

This is an awesome little muse! Reads so well and I love the last line! It's a real 'kick the can' with your pockets tugged down poem! Enjoyed!

You could retain the element of suspense all throughout and your handling of the phases of the illustrative poem is superb Kanav.

That's why I repeatedly say - Loneliness in a way is another form of death...... right penning Kanav

Beautifully rhyming verse on a blighted life! Enjoyed the easy flow of the whole poem! !

Like most of it... except the ending.... Love the title...

A delightful poem. Killing flies is just another way of killing some time. Hope the sorrows will fly away (excuse the pun) . Enjoyed the write. Please read my poem Valley of Despair