kanav justa

Veteran Poet - 1,477 Points (Shimla)

Constant Sorrow - Poem by kanav justa

Everyday
A Sunday

Tranquil I stay
Alone in my way
nothing to play
nothing to say


hairs getting gray
sadness they spray
and depressed i lay
Still without a pay

And all i pray
someone take me away

to a place where there are lots of flies at least I can spend my time killing them


Comments about Constant Sorrow by kanav justa

  • Dinesh Nair Dinesh Nair (4/20/2014 2:02:00 AM)

    You could retain the element of suspense all throughout and your handling of the phases of the illustrative poem is superb Kanav. (Report) Reply

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  • Amitava Sur Amitava Sur (1/20/2014 2:54:00 AM)

    That's why I repeatedly say - Loneliness in a way is another form of death...... right penning Kanav (Report) Reply

  • Valsa George Valsa George (12/15/2013 12:57:00 AM)

    Beautifully rhyming verse on a blighted life! Enjoyed the easy flow of the whole poem! ! (Report) Reply

  • Morose Mermaid Morose Mermaid (11/27/2013 12:08:00 AM)

    Like most of it... except the ending.... Love the title... (Report) Reply

  • Patricia Grantham Patricia Grantham (6/5/2013 9:25:00 PM)

    A delightful poem. Killing flies is just another way
    of killing some time. Hope the sorrows will fly away (excuse
    the pun) . Enjoyed the write. Please read my poem
    Valley of Despair (Report) Reply

  • Stevie Taite Stevie Taite (12/24/2012 2:46:00 AM)

    This is an awesome little muse! Reads so well and I love the last line! It's a real 'kick the can' with your pockets tugged down poem! Enjoyed! (Report) Reply

  • Stevie Taite Stevie Taite (12/24/2012 2:45:00 AM)

    This is an awesome little muse! Reads so well and I love the last line! It's a real 'kick the can' with your pockets tugged down poem! Enjoyed! (Report) Reply

  • Unwritten Soul Unwritten Soul (12/16/2012 8:54:00 AM)

    SO short but it conclude all perfectly....that's how a good poem can share! Nice nice nice write Kanav...it really good, very good..and so true heartfelt_Soul (Report) Reply

  • Jahan Zeb Jahan Zeb (12/16/2012 8:38:00 AM)

    You kept me guessing what the end will be like. there you go my dear. the last line is an extremely unexpected end. Very nice and very imaginative. You know your last line is very powerful. yes it's comic but means a lot and makes the readers thinking. What distress! if someone finds killing flies better than.
    10 out of 10 dear (Report) Reply

  • Owain Glyn (12/13/2012 2:44:00 PM)

    I have just got to tell you, there are very few pieces that I read that have made me laugh out loud, yours most certainly did! Not really fair to take it out on the poor flies! ha, ha, ha. I shall definitely read some more. Worth a 10 (Report) Reply

  • So Close So Close (12/13/2012 9:29:00 AM)

    the ending was so amazing.....keep on poeting...

    »so close« (Report) Reply

  • Herojit Philem Herojit Philem (12/13/2012 3:42:00 AM)

    There is kick in heart at the end of the poem...! ! ! ! Nice...! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, December 13, 2012



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