Bri Edwards Loves His Wife! ....[ Just In Case Anyone Doubts It; Personal; True, Except For Part 2 Of Example # 2 ] Poem by Bri Edwards

Bri Edwards Loves His Wife! ....[ Just In Case Anyone Doubts It; Personal; True, Except For Part 2 Of Example # 2 ]

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I love my wife, and she deserves having me,
…..though, on many topics, we do not agree.
She loves me, but at times just won't admit
…that we ARE, for each other, a "good fit".

Examples:

She has all the money; I help her to spend.
I wear holes in socks; socks she does mend.
She does cooking; the dishes I do then lick.
She washes clothes; I hang to dry real quick.

If ever I said, or implied, she's not perfect,
I must have been wrong.I mean incorrect.
I deserve HER, after, with 3 wives, I "failed".
After 12 years married, we have prevailed*!



(January …12th …2020)

*prevail:"be victorious"

Sunday, January 12, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: marriage,success
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Ok, marriages/"domestic partnerships" have their "Ups" and "Downs".To prevail, a couple needs patience, time to "cool off", tolerance, forgiveness, & apologies.Money helps sometimes, as does sex (sometimes) [if with the 'right' person(s) ! ], and a sense of humor/humour, and having enough of the 'necessities' like food, drink, warmth, and shelter.Does anyone disagree? !
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aniruddha Pathak 16 January 2020

I like the wit here, as usual, which the poem is full of. And when I read it, I felt like saying 'Me Too', oh no, make it 'I too'. Only difference is: I never failed, before I 'passed' the test. You, dear Bri, will have to accept my good taste.

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Valsa George 15 January 2020

Love this poem......! We don't doubt about your love for your wife..... why need an affirmation? As humans, no two person can agree on all points. There will be difference of opinion and disputes. But despite all minor scuffles, your relationship will prevail till the end, I am sure as you have learned valuable lessons from your previous marriages. A sure 10

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Akhtar Jawad 14 January 2020

I wish a happy conjugal life to Bri Edwards in the life to come.

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Mj Lemon 13 January 2020

The division of labour, the partnership...there is indeed love to be found when those relations reach a tranquil calm. A fantastic verse, Bri...

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