Bri Edwards Loves His Wife! ....[ Just In Case Anyone Doubts It; Personal; True Except For Part 2 Of Example # 2 ] Poem by Bri Edwards

Bri Edwards Loves His Wife! ....[ Just In Case Anyone Doubts It; Personal; True Except For Part 2 Of Example # 2 ]

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I love my wife, and she deserves having me,
…..though, on many topics, we do not agree.
She loves me, but at times just won't admit
…that we ARE, for each other, a "good fit".

Examples:

She has all the money; I help her to spend.
I wear holes in socks; socks she does mend.
She does cooking; the dishes I do then lick.
She washes clothes; I hang to dry real quick.

If ever I said, or implied, she's not perfect,
I must have been wrong.I mean incorrect.
I deserve HER, after, with 3 wives, I "failed".
After 12 years married, we have prevailed*!



(January …12th …2020)

*prevail:"be victorious"

Sunday, January 12, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: marriage,success
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Ok, marriages/"domestic partnerships" have their "Ups" and "Downs".To prevail, a couple needs patience, time to "cool off", tolerance, forgiveness, & apologies.Money helps sometimes, as does sex (sometimes) [if with the 'right' person(s) ! ], and a sense of humor/humour, and having enough of the 'necessities' like food, drink, warmth, and shelter.Does anyone disagree? !
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aniruddha Pathak 01 February 2020

Your wife must be very brave, To lift you up from the grave Of three failed marriages, But then life is a vain out for mirages. But still some of your counsels are sound, And formed from a valid ground.

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Aniruddha Pathak 01 February 2020

Oops, vain look out for mirages.

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Muhammad Ali 18 January 2020

I agree. Two persons can't be identical, but compatible. There are differences and diversity. One should or at least try to accept the diversity because it is natural. Nice poem and real issues.

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Bharati Nayak 17 January 2020

A good advice for married couples- - The poet's note to be noted. Thank you for sharing.

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Akhtar Jawad 14 January 2020

Liked it and going to read its second part.

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Kostas Lagos 13 January 2020

She is a patient person without any doubt!

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