Heather Burns

Between Two Hearts - Poem by Heather Burns

Tucked away in the
secret chambers of
of two hearts

a love never to be

to speak about is
the pain too great

between two hearts
a love story

the flame continues
to glow
lasting a lifetime.

heather burns

Comments about Between Two Hearts by Heather Burns

  • Bronze Star - 2,306 Points Bernard Snyder (6/18/2015 11:22:00 AM)

    Short, yet so very sweet! Great one Heather! (Report) Reply

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  • Bronze Star - 2,151 Points Sallam Yassin (8/5/2013 2:04:00 PM)

    true love is a secret of two hearts -true lasting a lifetime (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,979 Points Savita Tyagi (8/3/2013 7:53:00 PM)

    this poem resonates with a desire at the core of our innermost being. Share our love yet keep a little corner just for our self. Loved it even if I am wrong in my comment. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,887 Points Dave Walker (8/3/2013 3:01:00 AM)

    True love can never be broken. A great poem. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 12,325 Points Lyn Paul (7/31/2013 8:21:00 PM)

    The love never revealed yet it is the dreams that keep them going. Lovely words. JUst LOVE all the LOVE. Thank You (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 208 Points R.j. Wynn (7/31/2013 6:53:00 PM)

    The memories last night longer than the last meal shared. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,711 Points Valerie Dohren (7/31/2013 5:05:00 PM)

    A secret love? Perhaps it should be revealed. A lovely poem Heather. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,800 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (7/31/2013 9:19:00 AM)

    Love... lasting a lifetime. Beautifully expressed. Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,728 Points Lorraine Colon (7/30/2013 10:13:00 PM)

    Very nice poem, Heather. What a great idea! Love cannot be emphasized enough. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 667 Points Chandra Thiagarajan (7/30/2013 9:43:00 AM)

    The glowing flame of love between two hearts is expressed in simple but profound manner! Lovely! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 25,150 Points Valsa George (7/30/2013 3:27:00 AM)

    The sweet pangs of forbidden love, beautifully expressed! ! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 15,664 Points Ramesh Rai (7/29/2013 5:12:00 PM)

    OMG.just like to write the name of god.should i count it.thnx for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,796 Points Wahab Abdul (7/29/2013 3:43:00 PM)

    the hidden sadness expressed in the lines...to speak about is
    the pain too great..........................lovely poetry.. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,228 Points Thomas A Robinson (7/29/2013 3:23:00 PM)

    Everyone harbors a sacred flame of love, protected at all costs it is an eternal flame that gives light and warmth to a scared heart that has healed but has never forgotten. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 213 Points Siyabonga A Nxumalo (7/29/2013 2:47:00 PM)

    well penned poem about forbidden love. let me end here....
    Siya_! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 38 Points Lucifera Santez (7/29/2013 2:30:00 PM)

    you are maestro of words.
    this is a deep longing, tucked away in darkest recess of ones soul.
    as usual you have produced a piece of perfection.
    :) (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,023 Points Geetha Jayakumar (7/29/2013 1:18:00 PM)

    Beautiful poem on unspoken love.... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 4,802 Points Sekharan Pookkat (7/29/2013 1:05:00 PM)

    Speak about love
    And love to speak
    Till the flames of love
    Glow every where. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 4,941 Points Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi (7/29/2013 11:57:00 AM)

    unspoken hearts..very interesting, but too sad.. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, July 29, 2013

Poem Edited: Wednesday, July 31, 2013

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