Heather Burns


A Figment Of My Imagination - Poem by Heather Burns

A wonderful someone tall
and lean
Perhaps making the fairy
scene
Knocking on my door to
say
I'm your man from far away
Honey lips like the melon
dew,
A gentle spirit kind and
true.
A giving heart a summer
day,
Will it always be this way?
Coming from somewhere
across the sea,
Or will this always an
illusion be?











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Comments about A Figment Of My Imagination by Heather Burns

  • Gold Star - 27,130 Points Akhtar Jawad (11/15/2014 8:28:00 PM)

    Simplicity of language and description, beauty of emotional dreams, flow of lines with pretty words, love decorated with all the VIBGYOR colors, what a gift to the readers who love to read the poems from the windy lands....10 (Report) Reply

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,554 Points Bill Cantrell (7/22/2014 2:57:00 PM)

    Very nice poetry here, I just love poems wi74571th questions, especially with the last line ending with one. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 297 Points Chris G. Vaillancourt (5/6/2014 11:48:00 AM)

    this one moved me deeply...you've done some good strong writing here... good work! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,824 Points Khairul Ahsan (1/28/2014 2:34:00 AM)

    Heartiest congratulations on your poem being selected as the 'Poem of The Day from a Member' on 27 January 2014!
    You have depicted your 'figment of imagination' beautifully in this poem. It deserves a rating of 10/10, which I gave it.
    Like * Sunprincess * may I also ask, '........why does he have to be across the sea and far away? ' (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 14,027 Points * Sunprincess * (1/27/2014 9:41:00 PM)

    ........why does he have to be across the sea and far away? (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,092 Points Musfiq Us Shaleheen (1/27/2014 9:26:00 PM)

    beautiful heather.. i am your man from far away..
    honey lips like the melon dew.....
    congratulation! ! this poem is selected as a poem of the day...... (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,951 Points Bernard Snyder (1/27/2014 9:25:00 PM)

    Very lovely poem. Well-expressed! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 283 Points Sheldon Carruthers (1/27/2014 5:44:00 PM)

    enjoyed reading your poem (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,885 Points Sallam Yassin (1/27/2014 1:08:00 PM)

    beauty of heart Heather (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,116 Points Geetha Jayakumar (1/27/2014 10:39:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem from your pen. Congratulations! this poem is chosen as a poem of the day... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 96 Points Ruby Mostazir (1/27/2014 9:08:00 AM)

    Congratulations! am so happy because you are my fav poet always :) (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,609 Points Wahab Abdul (1/27/2014 8:16:00 AM)

    congratulation Ma'am for being chosen this poem as the poem of the day.. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,258 Points Tiku . (1/27/2014 6:57:00 AM)

    beautifully done.liked it. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,245 Points Pradip Chattopadhyay (1/27/2014 2:51:00 AM)

    simply said, it holds beauty in depth! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 35 Points Lucifera Santez (10/5/2013 11:23:00 AM)

    you are my favorite heather.
    you play with words with that original simplicity of child,
    and create beautiful things.
    a ten for it.
    :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Arti Chopra (8/24/2013 2:32:00 AM)

    Lovely dream....
    Maybe it came true for you
    Love your poems.... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 25 Points Phiwe Mbatha (7/21/2013 7:34:00 PM)

    Imagination is possible. Always (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 132 Points Marcus Mckinley (7/1/2013 3:00:00 PM)

    until your eyes are truly opened a figment it will always be. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,698 Points Elena Sandu (6/28/2013 6:05:00 PM)

    Nice flow! I almost danced on it. A dream to real life, shall always fit. Thank you! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,547 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (6/27/2013 9:20:00 PM)

    Imaginative and beautiful. Thank you. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, June 25, 2013

Poem Edited: Wednesday, August 13, 2014


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