Treasure Island

Cambridge Keenan

(Ontario, Canada)

Baby I'm Amazed By You


In the online world of virtual existence
Is another demension,
A Twighlight Zone if you will...
Expierences repeating themselves,
It's all over the news everynight,
Another shot gun shooting,
Another passionate murder,
Creeps crawling through the web like spiders,
Weaving their web with silken, pretty lies.
Lies of wonder, Lies of caring,
Lies of Love.
But you weren't like that were you? ?
You were not as a scammer surley? ?
Not You! ! No! ...Your one of the good guys...
One of a special few...an honest man
Revering the very Lord of the Universe!
A gentleman of honorable words and actions.
How long were you planning this plot?
Oh let me guess...you had a dry spot in your writing and needed a patsy
To act the role of character in your newest novel.
So that's where I fit in is it?
Wow....congratulations...
You got more than you barganed for..
Stealing my heart and shattering it into tiny pieces
You who knew better....
You a big shot writer...
You are unbelievable
You
BABY YOU AMAZE ME,
EVERY LITTLE THING THAT YOU DO.......
I am still in love with you! !
And crawling out of the DOME! !

Submitted: Thursday, July 11, 2013
Edited: Friday, July 12, 2013
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I'm Amazed.............? ? ! !


...................................... Cambridge Keenan

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