Vishal Sharma

Gold Star - 5,396 Points (10th July 1995/Samastipur (Bihar) / India)

Autobiography - Poem by Vishal Sharma

life takes many forms
many shapes and sizes
choose the one fits you the best
make this judgement not in haste
whether in slums
or in palace
whether in BMW
or in auto
whether your clothes are branded
or not
matters a trifle.

if you born poor
not your mistake
if you die poor,
certainly
your mistake.

life has twists and turns
nothing back returns
thus prison your precious life
in an autobiography.

Topic(s) of this poem: life


Comments about Autobiography by Vishal Sharma

  • Vishal Sharma Vishal Sharma (10/11/2015 2:35:00 PM)

    i didnt think so deep sir it may be childish over here as i am just a dirt of this section pardon (Report) Reply

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  • Fabrizio Frosini Fabrizio Frosini (10/11/2015 12:36:00 PM)

    '' if you die poor, / certainly / your mistake. '' ? ?

    ''CERTAINLY''..? ? Why?

    Take one of the many and many who escaped the horror of a war, with whole towns destroyed.. let's say Syria - just as an example - They have lost everything..
    Even those who had experienced a comfortable life - before the war - suddenly found themselves poor.. and not a few among them will die poor.. Why should it be their fault? (Report) Reply

  • Sadvansha Munshi Sadvansha Munshi (2/23/2014 8:58:00 AM)

    'if you born poor
    not your mistake
    if you die poor,
    certainly
    your mistake.' loved these lines! awesome! (Report) Reply

  • Vivian Nguyen Vivian Nguyen (9/13/2013 8:27:00 PM)

    This poem should be put in prison, before any lives you have laying around. Good gracious... (Report) Reply

  • Soumita Sarkar Soumita Sarkar (6/5/2013 10:58:00 AM)

    a delightful write to life life king size.............I invite you to read my poems and rate them.Thank you (Report) Reply

  • Unwritten Soul Unwritten Soul (5/16/2013 1:58:00 AM)

    Mature write from a young man... poetry really calling your mind to advance its step! _Soul (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, May 15, 2013

Poem Edited: Friday, November 13, 2015


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