Song Cry Poem by Vishal Sharma

Song Cry

Rating: 4.5


my heart doesnt have enough blood to drench my pains
cuz you pump out the largest plot i had for you
you didnt even think for a minute doing so
what would be my survival after you turn your back on
i cannot even cry thus i make this song cry...! !

Saturday, October 17, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Liza Sudina 17 October 2015

Visha! sorry to say so - but spit in that what you think love now. just spit. it is a lie. it will go. Pray: God have mercy on me -and it will fly away! Be free from passions!

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Rajnish Manga 17 October 2015

Very poignant episode which brings to fore the painful feelings after the break-up of two loving hearts. Gripping narrative.

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Shakil Ahmed 17 October 2015

nice poem, this is the concern of each person, well penned. thanks for sharing, if you find time please read some of my poems and leave your comment.

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Sanjukta Nag 18 October 2015

The agony of a lover is well expressed. keep the ball rolling Vishal.

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Edward Kofi Louis 17 October 2015

Nice work with the muse of love and pain! But, try to move on with your life. Nice work.

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Vishal Sharma 17 October 2015

thanks for a lot of encouragement now

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Ratnakar Mandlik 17 October 2015

Just forget and overcome. Such infatuations are short lived in adolescence and youth. Always be optimistic and it will surely pay.

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Jaishree Nair 17 October 2015

The lament of broken love .thanks

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