Vishal Sharma

(10th july 1996/Samastipur (Bihar) / India)

A Drop Of Sea


eyes
within eyes
heart
within lies
searching...
the one
the perfect
without defect
who can really
be mine
my future
my adventure
ultimetly,
my life...
are you that one
mine has gone
deep into sea
beneath the pain
i have gain
basket of tears
handfull of unfortunate
mouthfull of abuses
are you listening...
readers
how she was cruel
promising me the
whole sea
she threw
a drop on me.

Submitted: Thursday, May 16, 2013
Edited: Thursday, May 16, 2013

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  • Rookie - 81 Points Mohabeer Beeharry (8/20/2013 5:04:00 AM)

    A lot of subtle emotion.but I guess it happens in life.
    Great writing
    Congrats

    Mohabeer Beeharry
    Read my poems sometimes (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 5,343 Points Roseann Shawiak (8/13/2013 11:43:00 AM)

    Your poem made me remember when I was younger and looking for my one true love - he never came - until I stopped looking. Now 37 years later we are still married and in love. A lucky one - I got the ocean. Love this poem - I too had heartaches before finding my true love - before that only a drop from each one. Growing old together is so much fun! Even through the trials and suffering we are one. Thank you for such a beautiful poem. Keep writing, your poetry will lead you to maturity. Always go back and read the first poems you wrote and you will see how much you've grown through the years. RoseAnn (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Sj Holland (6/18/2013 12:02:00 PM)

    Excellent passage,

    ...how she was cruel
    promising me the
    whole sea
    she threw
    a drop on me.

    Great ending too. It just leaves the painful truth hanging, just like the subject of the poem must have felt. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,078 Points Ambrosia A (5/17/2013 11:14:00 PM)

    Very nice write. Many of the lovers (mostly in disguise) promise ocean, while we needed a drop. Alas finally betrayed amidst the sea, not a drop to drink and survive. keep penning, you have a nice skill of selecting simple, yet lovely words. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,078 Points Paul Brookes (5/16/2013 2:09:00 AM)

    Ah love can be so cruel. You may search for perfection but end up with compromise. I like your style very well written poem. thanks for sharing BB : O) (Report) Reply

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