Jahan zaib

Rookie - 82 Points (February 05,1981 / Malakand Pakistan)

A Scene From The Garden - Poem by Jahan zaib

In a still wind, a twig moves up and down
Forcing me to see the lady with a crown
Dancing without wind in clothes of green
Smiling with the petals pink, a most happy scene
As I got closer I saw a honey bee
Kissing a flower and sucking nectar sweet
Dancing as a lover upon the movement of a rose
As though having beloved next to heart and so very close

Jahan Zaib 23/12/2012


Comments about A Scene From The Garden by Jahan zaib

  • Rookie - 12 Points Farah Ilyas (4/29/2013 1:42:00 PM)

    though its a imaginative poem, but Jahan Zaib always sketches his imagery in such a way that it sounds to be natural & real one...beautiful composition, beautiful diction, beautiful scene is created..wow, am compelled to say wow! amazing (Report) Reply

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  • Silver Star - 4,059 Points Patricia Grantham (3/11/2013 8:25:00 AM)

    I love this one, beautiful pictures in a garden. A bee
    pollinating the flowers. By the way I have a little be pointer on my screen!
    Real poetry in motion. Well crafted verses. Thanks. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Stevie Taite (1/10/2013 4:48:00 PM)

    Beautiful imagery and a lovely flow! X (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,243 Points Musfiq Us Shaleheen (12/31/2012 12:35:00 PM)

    very nicely painted the imagery! ! .. well crafted... (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,514 Points Hans Vr (12/26/2012 7:54:00 AM)

    Sounds like magical moments of amazing beauty.
    Excellently written. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 14,297 Points * Sunprincess * (12/24/2012 7:59:00 PM)

    oh this is very beautiful..this one has my favourites flowers and honey bees..
    sure my dear also wishing you a merry christmas and a happy new year
    with lots of love! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 93 Points Payal Parande (12/24/2012 9:46:00 AM)

    ahh...what a view..you gave me the beautiful feeling of the remarkable garden indoor how incredible way you have with your words i am in awe..... (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,253 Points Unwritten Soul (12/24/2012 9:29:00 AM)

    I know why you can dancing without wind because the beautiful scene is so amazing, i bear it here now! _Soul (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 4,683 Points Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi (12/24/2012 8:08:00 AM)

    a perfect scene from a garden! very beautiful with a wink! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,229 Points Thomas A Robinson (12/24/2012 7:52:00 AM)

    beautiful poem, so much beauty in so few words. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, December 23, 2012

Poem Edited: Monday, December 24, 2012


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